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A Musical Spring

The trees so whisper A whoosh simple tease Their voice in the breeze When the sun ray’s shine Upon new born leaves. No bluebell blues Natures carpet A symphony Of colour tall. Harmonized Yellow heads Spring to life. Blackbird In song. Sings. © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Date: 3/17/2022 1:45:00 AM
Lively and enchanting scenes from nature during the season of spring ! Beautifully composed, harry !
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Date: 10/12/2021 1:02:00 AM
Very, very effective...and most appealing in its colourful simplicity. Keep up the excellent work, harry! My very best regards as always. :) john
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Date: 3/18/2021 12:51:00 PM
I sometimes wonder if the musical sounds in nature led human beings to be musical themselves. This wonderful, harmonious verse is picture perfect. ;)
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Date: 3/13/2021 9:38:00 PM
Oh well done Harry. I could feel Spring all around me as I read. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/6/2021 6:23:00 PM
Perfect title for a perfect poem :)
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Date: 3/6/2021 11:25:00 AM
So evocative of the tender moments of spring, especially like 'new born leaves' and 'nature's carpet' - I think this will do well!
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Date: 3/6/2021 6:30:00 AM
Should I congratulate you now? Well done Harry. ;0)
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:57:00 AM
Enjoyed your touch of spring in poetic form. Spring is coming along slowly but soon will be upon us. I do enjoy a nice spring day. Thanks for your visit to my page and for taking the time to comment on my work "Homicide". Sara
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Date: 3/5/2021 7:55:00 PM
Simply beautiful!
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful Harry. I felt as though I was walking through a field of wild flowers. Good job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/5/2021 12:26:00 PM
love this, Harry - a beautiful entry for the contest
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Date: 3/5/2021 12:17:00 PM
Hi Harry, The image you have created is nothing short of a fabulous painting of Spring! Good Luck in the contest! Take Care, Paulette
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Date: 3/4/2021 10:26:00 AM
Harry, Beautiful "A symphony Of colour tall." I see and feel all of it. Just lovely! All the best, Susan :)
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:53:00 AM
Oh, you work so well in this form, Harry! I love the spring "music" that plays throughout your poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2021 7:37:00 AM
Caren should like this one, because I like it. Good luck with it in her contest.
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Date: 3/4/2021 5:57:00 AM
Wonderful vision... a caress of the season. Love it. God bless you always dear friend, Gina
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Date: 3/4/2021 5:33:00 AM
Lovely sights and sounds of spring, Harry. All the best.
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Date: 3/4/2021 4:57:00 AM
Blackbirds and bluebells and whispering trees...soaking it all in, dear friend! It’s nearly Spring!
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Date: 3/4/2021 2:52:00 AM
There is perfect music in this poem of birds singing. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/4/2021 1:27:00 AM
Natures symphony strikes up to herald springs approach, and welcome it is too. Good luck Harry Tom
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Date: 3/3/2021 11:17:00 PM
WoW!Harry, You've penned a lovely write for the contest theme. Your poem is filled with Spring images. It looks amazing. Spring is in the air, and it will be hear soon and I can't wait. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/3/2021 10:25:00 PM
Good form, good poem. Liked it a lot. I especially liked "Harmonized Yellow heads Spring to life." John
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