Harry Horsman Poet Diminished Hexaverse

A Musical Spring

The trees so whisper
A whoosh simple tease
Their voice in the breeze
When the sun ray’s shine
Upon new born leaves.

No bluebell blues
Natures carpet
A symphony
Of colour tall.

Harmonized
Yellow heads
Spring to life.

Blackbird
In song.

Sings.

 © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Valsa George March 17, 2022 at 1:45 AM Lively and enchanting scenes from nature during the season of spring ! Beautifully composed, harry !

John Fleming October 12, 2021 at 1:02 AM Very, very effective...and most appealing in its colourful simplicity. Keep up the excellent work, harry! My very best regards as always. :) john

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 18, 2021 at 12:51 PM I sometimes wonder if the musical sounds in nature led human beings to be musical themselves. This wonderful, harmonious verse is picture perfect. ;)

Judy Ball March 13, 2021 at 9:38 PM Oh well done Harry. I could feel Spring all around me as I read. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Angela Crabtree March 6, 2021 at 6:23 PM Perfect title for a perfect poem :)

Michelle Faulkner March 6, 2021 at 11:25 AM So evocative of the tender moments of spring, especially like 'new born leaves' and 'nature's carpet' - I think this will do well!

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2021 at 6:30 AM Should I congratulate you now? Well done Harry. ;0)

Sara Kendrick March 6, 2021 at 4:57 AM Enjoyed your touch of spring in poetic form. Spring is coming along slowly but soon will be upon us. I do enjoy a nice spring day. Thanks for your visit to my page and for taking the time to comment on my work "Homicide". Sara

Akkina Downing March 5, 2021 at 7:55 PM Simply beautiful!

Judy Ball March 5, 2021 at 2:34 PM Beautiful Harry. I felt as though I was walking through a field of wild flowers. Good job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne March 5, 2021 at 12:26 PM love this, Harry - a beautiful entry for the contest

Paulette Calasibetta March 5, 2021 at 12:17 PM Hi Harry, The image you have created is nothing short of a fabulous painting of Spring! Good Luck in the contest! Take Care, Paulette

Susan Lawrence March 4, 2021 at 10:26 AM Harry, Beautiful "A symphony Of colour tall." I see and feel all of it. Just lovely! All the best, Susan :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2021 at 7:53 AM Oh, you work so well in this form, Harry! I love the spring "music" that plays throughout your poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Hugs, carolyn

Robert Pettit March 4, 2021 at 7:37 AM Caren should like this one, because I like it. Good luck with it in her contest.

Regina Mcintosh March 4, 2021 at 5:57 AM Wonderful vision... a caress of the season. Love it. God bless you always dear friend, Gina

Vijay Pandit March 4, 2021 at 5:33 AM Lovely sights and sounds of spring, Harry. All the best.

Kim Rodrigues March 4, 2021 at 4:57 AM Blackbirds and bluebells and whispering trees...soaking it all in, dear friend! It’s nearly Spring!

Victor Buhagiar March 4, 2021 at 2:52 AM There is perfect music in this poem of birds singing. Best for a win.

Tom Cunningham March 4, 2021 at 1:27 AM Natures symphony strikes up to herald springs approach, and welcome it is too. Good luck Harry Tom

Alexis Y. March 3, 2021 at 11:17 PM WoW!Harry, You've penned a lovely write for the contest theme. Your poem is filled with Spring images. It looks amazing. Spring is in the air, and it will be hear soon and I can't wait. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

J. Summers March 3, 2021 at 10:25 PM Good form, good poem. Liked it a lot. I especially liked "Harmonized Yellow heads Spring to life." John