A Musical Name...Claire Elise

It's almost as if Beethoven, had seen her gamin face
And had composed a melody...to match her given name
My grandchild, sweet Claire Elise, I love your name, so fair
You bear the name, so filled with grace of fragrant springtime air
Each letter, bound together, forms a soothing lyrical sound
She has mischief set between her eyes...and with cheeks the color rose
Such a name that fits her many moods, like a poem so filled with prose
She is daughter of springtime, impatient as the seasons
Twirling like a whirlwind, never needing any reason
She's an imp, she's a beauty, she is like a butterfly's cocoon
She is living on the threshold, of a flower soon to bloom
Summer glistens in her raven locks, winter hides behind her pout
Autumn waiting in the colors, she is changing all about
Her beauty leaves me breathless, like the sound of her sweet name
Claire Elise...my love unfolds....a greater beauty still untold
Beneath the moon, beneath the skies, just as your name implies
You are the greatest gift, I've ever received,
You are heaven sent, on angel wings
From your mother's winsome smile 
And the teasing loving twinkle in your daddy's gleaming eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem to your granddaughter and your win. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 12:13 PM
I know about loving a grandchild..youve put into wonderful words...congrats on your success in the contest. BG
Brown Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Even A Name Can Be Poetry'. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in Constance's contest with these wonderful words and your special presentation.. enjoy another victory tonight..with luv..
Brumley Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Nothing quite as precious as a grandchild. Congrats on your fourth place win!
La France Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations, Carrie on fourth place in my contest, Even A Name Can Be Poetry, with this beautiful poem ~~
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carrie. The best to you in the contest. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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July 30, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Lovely name and if She takes after her grandma,she must be a beauty,inside and out,lovely poem. .C.C.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 8:52 PM
This is perfect for this kind of contest, Carrie. it's just got to do really really well! Luv, Andrea ps LOVE that name too
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Oh! The love that we grandparents have for those grandchildren..I can just see this little one..You have painted her as an active, happy beauty which I know she is...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog..Glad that you liked the pictures..Sara
Mehta Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:31 PM
A nice write on your grandchild , Carrie
Dillard Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Speaking of names...Claire Elise does have a pleasant ring to it. I have a Leila Grace and Drew Ardyn here. I've been too busy to write this summer. Maybe I'll get back in the swing now. I've been keeping up with your winnings though! I read daily. Good luck with this one by the way. And be ready for the book,soon! RAY
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