A Mouse Or A Mountain

Growing up, I was the runt of the litter. My siblings called me Cute, because I was the youngest one. It was very hard growing up as a little mouse, gray with tiny white spots. I saw myself as big as a mountain, then felt that mountain move inside of me. Growing and learning is what I did, then one day I was all grown up. I wondered, where would the world take me? I found myself living on top, yes on top of a mountain. I am no longer the runt, I am no longer called Cute. Living on top of this mountain, is my home. The mouse and the mountain, now has become one.
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Date: 6/8/2024 1:37:00 PM
Ver good Pauke, It gives us insight into houw far you have come Woe Pangir
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun mouse write/tale. Yes, we can reach new heights in life if we will try. One never knows how far they can go... Have a fun day writing away...............
Date: 6/6/2024 11:05:00 PM
It's so great to reach new heights! I enjoyed this inspiring little tale, Paula. Blessings. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/7/2024 9:34:00 AM
Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun mouse write/tale. Yes, it is great to reach new heights in life. Have a fun day writing away...............
Date: 6/2/2024 9:00:00 PM
Sounds like a merger of the finest, Paula! Hard to beat such a combination. ~ Paul Bunyan and Painful Bunions (LOL).
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/3/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun mouse write. It was fun to write... Have a fun day writing away...............
Date: 5/29/2024 3:46:00 AM
I'm so happy for you, my friend Paula, and who better than you to reach that top of the mountain, each of your poems you post, one better than the last, you have never been a mouse, a sure mountain that was waiting to be conquered. I foresee a win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2024 9:39:00 AM
Thank You for writing and for your very kind words. You have put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Glad you enjoyed my fun mouse write. I enjoyed bringing this fun one to life. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away...............
Date: 5/28/2024 2:21:00 PM
Ahh!! Very descriptive one about yourself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun mouse write. It is not about me. Just a cute mouse write. Hope it makes the readers smile... Have a fun day writing away...............
Date: 5/28/2024 12:26:00 PM
A Mouse Or A Mountain ~ Date Written:5/28/2024
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