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A Mountain Frosted White

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Mountain crest frosted in cold snowy white Sparkling with countless facets of pyrite basking in the golden glow of sunlight With feathered wings, to the top I'd take flight Summit's beauty is enhanced at twilight Shadows frame the majesty of its height As the sun bows low, my eyes glimpse the sight of sheep scaling the mountain for the night Rising from the ground, like a stalagmite, stands this monolith mountain of graphite. Infused with the radiance of starlight, I pen the visions that bring me delight. ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ August 25th, 2016

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/30/2016 3:23:00 PM

Lin, such a lovely monoryhme! congrats on your top spot! :)-luloo

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 4:49:00 PM

Thanks very much, Luloo.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2016 2:31:00 PM

Hi Lyn, I had not realized that you were back writing and competing again! This is such a lovely poem where beautiful imagery and delightful rhyme take centre stage. ~ Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:04:00 PM

Hey Paul. I had some down time from editing this past week, so I thought I'd toss a few ingredients in the soup pot. I owed John a write since I missed his last contest, and he honored this one. Thanks so much for liking it!

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 8/30/2016 12:22:00 PM

Awe-inspiring Lin!Congrats on your win!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sara.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/30/2016 8:21:00 AM

Congrats Lin, for your overall WIN in the contest, with this splendid piece!! ;-)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:26:00 AM

I'm honored by your comments, Teddy. Thanks!

Phillip Garcia

Date: 8/30/2016 1:10:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. The 'ite' rhyme is much difficult than what I used (I know because I tried) - I loved that early on in your poem I forgot that i was reading monorhyme. It flowed and utilized the rhyme without relying on it. If I'm to be truthful then any shared spotlight on me should be instead on you.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:24:00 AM

Only your humble nature supersedes your poetic skill. Thank you very much, Phillip, but your monorhyme write is wonderful! I appreciate your gracious comments ;-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2016 12:23:00 AM

I knew this would win:) it had to..congratulations, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:20:00 AM

Thanks for both of your visits, Jo. I appreciate you for reading me and taking time to comment.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/29/2016 11:19:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place with this wonderful lines. :) Sunita

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 12:18:00 AM

Thanks, Sunita. I appreciate that.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/29/2016 9:27:00 PM

Lovely win! Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 12:17:00 AM

Thanks very much, Kim.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/29/2016 6:58:00 PM

Hi Lin, This is so beautiful and breathtaking. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 12:17:00 AM

Thank you very much for such kind compliments, Alexis.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/29/2016 6:18:00 PM

The Matterhorn mountain soars along with this inspiring poem Lin. Congratulations on your deserved first place win! It is beautiful! 7 ; )

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie. It was the perfect mountain for the description.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/29/2016 4:11:00 PM

Congrats!!! Lin...its nice to say that lol...a beautiful write my friend...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:27:00 PM

Thank you ^WW^ ~ You know I appreciate your visits and comments.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/29/2016 3:58:00 PM

Back on top again, congratulations Lin...

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:26:00 PM

Charlie...Thank you!

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/29/2016 3:33:00 PM

Great imagery, and amazing use of monorhymes, Lin. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Sandra. Hugs to you, too.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/29/2016 2:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/29/2016 2:33:00 PM

What can I say, just a fantastic write, pyrite, stalagmite, graphite, who would think of these words? You of course! Great job as always, congrats on shared number 1!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 6:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, John. This rhymed poem and the win you've bestowed on it means a lot to me. I am honored to share the spot with Phillip.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/29/2016 1:58:00 AM

What a delightful beauty! Glad I came by here today:) love this picturesque poem:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/29/2016 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for the thoughts, Jo.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/26/2016 12:36:00 PM

You pen visions that bring us all delight! Over and over again you do this!!! Lovely scene you painted and brought to life - a joy to read. Good luck always ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 8/27/2016 4:00:00 PM

You are such an encouragement to me, CayCay. My gratitude and thanks for your sweet comments.

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/25/2016 12:34:00 PM

Lin, your poetry is like a breath of fresh air. Thank you for sharing your visions with words.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/26/2016 8:33:00 AM

And thank YOU, Danny, for your kind comments. ;-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2016 12:06:00 PM

Lin it is a beautiful poem.The photo is beautiful.I enjoyed reading it.I rated your poem number 1

Lin Lane
Date: 8/26/2016 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. Love your French name.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/25/2016 11:34:00 AM

Beautiful imagery...a vivid picture. :) Sunita

Lin Lane
Date: 8/26/2016 8:31:00 AM

Thank you, Sunita.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2016 11:08:00 AM

Beautiful descriptive monorhyme you painted a wonderful image in my mind Lin and I love the creative title!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Lin Lane
Date: 8/26/2016 8:31:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan. Hugs back to you.