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A Mountain Breeze Was Flowing

So high it looks from down here these first few steps so hard just one foot in front of the other tell yourself nothing is impossible make that inner strength your guard A few hours have now passed having not reached yet half way looking down looks a big drop but keep your eyes always up ban that word never say stop The wind really catches your breath but follow on aim truly for the top then respite comes with some relief that peak is within your eye sight confidence increases with sure belief A mountain breeze was flowing all around blows all one's hair that hair stylist is no good now but it sure felt good deep inside reached the peak only to dare!

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Date: 4/23/2017 9:45:00 AM
Oh! Did you really climb a mountain peak? that must have been so amazing, I have never done anything like that:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 4/23/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Jo, sorry I never climbed this mountain as it was just some imaginative thoughts putting pen to paper, trust all's well, blessings Gordon

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