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A Mother's Kiss

When the world falls flat on your head Everyone is gone as if all dead The earth goes on without you People are capable who knew Meanwhile you’re all alone Desperately wish you had a clone As loving and doting as a mother’s kiss One who’d help you through all this AP: 2nd place 2021 Posted on December 13, 2018

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Date: 12/18/2018 12:36:00 PM
True and touching. My mum passed in 1988, oh I could use one of her kisses right now. Thank you, THANK YOU, for reminding me of her. <3
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 12/18/2018 4:18:00 PM
Awww thank you, so kind of you, you have made my day! the best to you and yours
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/18/2018 1:09:00 PM
She's looking at your right now from above and could not be more proud, Timothy. Line xx
Date: 12/14/2018 10:39:00 PM
I can feel your emotion. It's universal. Love
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/15/2018 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Anisha.
Date: 12/14/2018 6:10:00 AM
Very touching... I've definitely felt this way.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.

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