Mel Merrill Poet Rhyme

A Most Inspired Guest

The shady wood I came upon
Was so adequately blessed,
I determined I would tarry there
If only for a rest.

The trees were as cathedrals
And the floor was mossy green--
While the scattered beams of sunlight
Made the site the more serene.

The cool and misty morning air
Did my worries quickly dim--
It was a sanctuary of a sort;
The breeze was as a hymn.

And I thought I saw an angel,
Though it may have been a deer--
Still God was then less distant
Just as heaven was more near.

That shady wood I came upon
Was by God so richly dressed,
I offered up a prayer of thanks--
A most inspired guest!

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Robert Lindley May 25, 2014 at 11:34 PM Congrats on the win!!! Mel Merrill May 26, 2014 at 12:29 AM Thank you Robert. This was my first post on this site, so it's cool that it's getting a few reads it wouldn't have otherwise. Thanks for the congrats...Mel :)

Joseph May May 23, 2014 at 8:01 AM "The breeze was as a hymn"...love it..great write...congrats on your win Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 10:51 AM Thank you Joseph. This poem is near and dear for a few reasons, and this place is as real as if I'd been there--which, courtesy of my imagination, I have :) I appreciate the comment and congrats, my friend...Mel :)

Tim Smith May 23, 2014 at 12:21 AM Very nice MM....congrats on your fine win Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 12:48 AM Thank you Tim. Kind of you to stop by and lend your support. I surely do appreciate it, my friend. Have a great weekend...Mel :)

Ivor Kos May 22, 2014 at 9:47 PM Sir, this is a most original and unique take on this topic you've approached. I truly enjoyed this, without a doubt! Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 12:43 AM My good friend Ivo. Thank you again for kindly commenting and inspiring me to write another day. I'm glad you liked this; it was my first post :) Have a great weekend, and stay in touch...Mel :)

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 8:07 PM Take your time Mel, I'm in no hurry... BTW... I love making trips down to your pages. :) Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2014 at 9:06 AM Okay Mel, I will... :) Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 12:37 AM That's because you have exquisite taste lol There are some okay poems here and there, but a few I'd like to take down. Maybe you could soup me sometime and tell if that can be done, and how. Forever...xox...Mel :)

Casarah Nance May 22, 2014 at 4:11 PM wtg on first place hun :) Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 12:46 AM I appreciate that very much. That spot is more or less reserved for me, though you should still compete lol Hugs and smiles...xox...mel :)

Paul Callus May 22, 2014 at 3:49 PM Beautiful picture you painted here, Mel. Such a peaceful sanctuary! congrats on a deserved win. // paul Mel Merrill May 23, 2014 at 12:41 AM Thank you Paul. You know, that's what I was after; a sense of serenity and peace. Funny, I can see that place now as if I was really there. It is beautiful :) Have a great Friday, my friend...Mel :)

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 12:55 PM WOW, no doubt I love your poetry Mel, .. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-) Mel Merrill May 22, 2014 at 2:57 PM Thank you Darlin' I'll check that out soon as work is done, which won't be till about 9:00, which is why I'm up sooo late. Don't get to sleep till about 3:00 most nights. Thanks for commenting---again :) This poem was my first post...imagine. Been writing for years, though, like you. Enjoy your day...Luv and hugs...Mel :)

Cecilia Macfarlane April 25, 2014 at 4:46 PM You expressed the beauty and comfort of the shady wood wonderfully. A warm welcome(a bit late) to the soup. Hugs Mel Merrill April 26, 2014 at 12:47 AM Better late than never :) Special words from a special lady--and gifted poet. I appreciate your kind words of support and encouragement Hugs xo ;-)

Kim Merryman April 19, 2014 at 8:07 PM Mel, thank you for pointing me in the direction of this poem. I love this. The scene you have described is so peaceful and uplifting. Makes me wish I were there Love, Kim Mel Merrill April 19, 2014 at 11:54 PM Thank you Kim. And yes, it is a beautiful place, or so I imagine! Love and hugs, Mel

Bl Devnath April 18, 2014 at 10:22 AM Very nice poem tied with beautiful feeling you have written, read it and felt it to the extent possible from my end. Lovely done. Thanks always and loved always, my poetess friend, bl Mel Merrill April 18, 2014 at 11:26 PM And to you. This poem is from the heart, as you seem to comprehend. Thanks for reading it. Peace, my good friend. Mel :)

Skat A April 12, 2014 at 10:12 PM Hi Mel, I can't find the poem, you mentioned in the comment:) I'll be right back. ~SKAT~ Mel Merrill April 13, 2014 at 1:43 AM "I'll be right back." Your too funny, but I like that. If you want to keep up with me sister, you better sharpen your already razor-like wit. Did I say sister? Sensory overload; too much imagery wmp. Luv and hugs, mel :)

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2014 at 9:42 PM Hi Mel ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA Mel Merrill April 13, 2014 at 1:46 AM I didn't know. I just found out I made #1 new poet, which is awesome, and now this. And it's not even my birthday--thank God. Let me know if I win a new car, or something :) Luv and hugs // mel :)

Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2014 at 7:03 AM How beautiful you have painted this picture for us to see. Relaxing to see and read. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Many blessings... Lucilla Mel Merrill April 8, 2014 at 12:17 PM Lucilla, you've made my day--thank you. Guest is a painting; I'm glad you could see it--what a beautiful place. You're beautiful too. Thanks for stopping by, :) Mel

Dr.Ram Mehta April 7, 2014 at 5:44 AM A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , mel Mel Merrill April 7, 2014 at 12:10 PM Dr. Ram, honored to hear from you. A sincere thanks for the comment and encouragement. Mel

Lynn Glover April 6, 2014 at 3:57 PM Mel, a most beautiful poem. I really admire those capable of rhyming and descriptive methods that had me setting in the forest with you. A great job. Enjoyable reading. Lynn Mel Merrill April 7, 2014 at 12:47 AM Thank you Lynn. You obviously have a good eye for poetry lol. Seriously, I appreciate your kind words and support. I'll have to check out some of your work. Thanks again, ;) Mel

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2014 at 4:27 PM "P.S. How do I get my photo on here? "- It is very simple: -1.Member Area - 2.Personal Profile Links - 3.Change Avatar (Photo) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A March 28, 2014 at 12:45 PM Mel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Mel Merrill March 28, 2014 at 11:46 PM Hey SKAT. Thanks for the welcome, and you can be my newest, bestest friend. I'm 6'0", slender with chestnut hair and blue eyes--and I'm a distant cousin of Emily Dickinson so poetry is in my blood. So, who is SKAT--I'm curious. Via Con Dios my friend. XOXO ;-)

Poet Destroyer A March 28, 2014 at 10:44 AM Mel, a highly loved poem. I enjoyed the guest The imagery is overwhelming. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Mel Merrill March 28, 2014 at 11:39 AM Thank you for your kind words of support. One can't have too many friends or too much family. Here at poetry soup I hope to find both. Thank you again for reading my first submission and for taking the time to comment. Mel <-@ BTW, how do I get a photo on here?

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2014 at 4:05 AM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mel :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Mel Merrill March 28, 2014 at 11:46 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. I appreciate your kind words and warm welcome. I look forward to reading your poems, and I hope to hear from you again soon. Peace. oxox // Mel :) P.S. How do I get my photo on here?