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When Spring departs, new season's richer buds bloom with complexion more intense than in past temperate months. In this lovely clime, I lease an hour to walk in the soothing shade. And, as I stroll- like heaven, is the lush, untrimmed, and verdant beauty this stage brings. My gift to grasp possession of- for soon this seemed eternal bliss paints Autumn's gold. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: A Summer's Day Redo Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner Required Words: buds, complexion, temperate, lease, shade heaven, untrimmed, possession, eternal, gold

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Date: 8/29/2019 6:06:00 PM
From spring to summer's bliss until autumn's kiss! I love the image of this Sandra. Congratulations on your podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:02:00 PM
A nice rendition appropriated righteously per word in your winning verse -- compliments indeed ~ Aloha William
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:07:00 PM
This is so evocative and lovely, Sandra, congratulations on your placement in my contest!
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