A Morning Star

Oh fallen star of Bethlehem, your established moment shines,
upon canvas of harsh intent, descendent of heavenly design?

A mighty angel’s leading light to those befallen, pleasure-bent?
Are gleaming eyes  masking spites or, our demands, aspiring content?

Looking toward skies o’er Bethlehem, as prides of mortal men delight;
bearing gifts; coffered obedience, marking paths, Magi alight.

When losing sight of stellar sign, in Jerusalem they did quick inquire,
at palace great, to a king divined;  hoped route, from Herod, to acquire.

II

We saw a star  (when in the east) and have come to render our obeisance,
said light has left us briefly,  too the wakes of our continuance.

While in the kingdom his star was seen, glancing eyes into glass orbs stared.
Expectant sighs at skies portending, bejeweled fingers into cauldrons stirred.

A caravan of mystics then gathering, consigned to cross harsh lands at night.
Postured gifts, too much appeasing, a source of imminences, expelling light.

Great Herod stirred with agitation, “Summon to me, scribes and priest,”
and they spoke to him of Bethlehem, from whence shall come a Jewish King.

Elsewhere God’s swift messenger, arrives with tidings of glad news:
Rejoice! Rejoice for the Lamb’s shepherd! Blessed are borne Jacob’s sons to truth.

That one drawing light from the light’s giver, firstborn of heaven’s womb.
He has taken breath that men be delivered, fear no more, door’s enclosing tombs.

III

One question, in cautious need; discerns plucked from common threads.
What purposed such judicious leads, as that star’s light to Jesus led?

What cause that such symbol did cease, perhaps a plan most devious shed?
To turn also eyes of Herod east, these, jealous guards of scriptures read.

Oh bright stars over Christendom, look! Your beam’s a turning compass,
your ray, as flames with many tongues, scouring Earth in hopes of bliss.

Misleading truths, mounting traditions, swallowed lies drunk from waters shallow.
The wise one is made fool again, if needs a lamp, above a Christ we can follow.

With signs, divinities are misconstrued, as such, a star; still you teach our youth? 
As light into the night deludes,  beware, convincing knees to bending truths.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 3:11:00 PM
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Date: 9/27/2009 9:35:00 AM
Michael, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:26:00 PM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke
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Date: 9/1/2009 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations, Michael, on having your well-written poem featured this week. It entices the mind to inquire and the spirit to seek God's light within.. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Michael, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 5:42:00 PM
Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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