A Moon Brighter Than the Sun

The moon, without brightness of its own, asked the sun for 
a daily loan of light.

To which the sun, jealous of its monopoly on light, responded, “You will reflect but a mere fraction of my brilliance.”

“Then I will have to make it count,” thought the moon.  

Thus night is alive with sights touched by the moon and made brighter by shadows,  

a lone ship moving soundlessly on a lunar sea,
cobblestones glistening after rain,
a woman’s dress ablaze with sequins on a balcony,
a caravan silhouetted atop a sand dune,  
the feeling confessed by the eyes of two would-be lovers on a country lane, 
a baby asleep in a cradle, moonlit through the bedroom window. 

Glimpses which the sun, with its all-illuminating light, would only hide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/17/2024 12:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:50:00 AM
Nice work! I can hear the moon speaking!
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Date: 2/10/2023 7:29:00 AM
Lovely way to think of moonlight, Bernard. I've enjoyed this.
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Date: 2/9/2023 3:33:00 PM
a great walk in the moonlight...loved it
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Date: 2/9/2023 2:42:00 PM
you write such lovely poems.
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Date: 12/26/2021 5:16:00 PM
This is just splendid. Excellent imagery! Wow! Awaken the children slowly, carefully, or they may feel little more than shadows, frantic with light. Joe.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 12/28/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Joe. Appreciated.
Date: 5/22/2021 11:37:00 AM
Wow!! I read again and again and arrived at the end of your art of gem. Philosophically sweet. What wonderful Ode to Moon by a brilliant man.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/26/2021 4:15:00 AM
Thanks very much, Iris. So kind of you.
Date: 2/16/2021 8:36:00 AM
oh I love all those moonlit glimpses! lovely to see your writes again :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2021 7:09:00 PM
Hey Susan, how are ya? Thanks. Stay safe :)
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