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( Painting by Andre' Kohn - the Bennet Sisters and Mr Darcy are characters from the classic Jane Austin novel 'Pride & Prejudice' )

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Resting it ever-so-gently on her shoulder, the young girl twirled the brightly-colored parasol in her hand and like a child's pinwheel it became a blur - a joyous dizzy dance of vivid rainbow shades ... Bringing the gloomy air around her (and the wet sidewalk), to gaudy life ... the rapid rotations spinning the rain off like a lawn sprinkler - it was THAT sight that made her think of her sister and warm summer showers at the farm ... They'd put bathing suits on and dance together among the pear trees pretending they were the precocious "Bennet" sisters (vying for the attention of Mr Darcy, of course) soft grass like a chartreuse carpet under their tender toes ... Spinning and giggling and teasing each other in their horribly feigned British accents ... oh, for just one more of those carefree country days - life was anything BUT fanciful now - private school and obligations and over five years since her sister had passed ... But, she was with her, still and this was her kind of day she would make the most of it, her beloved sister's umbrella in her grasp - celebrate life itself and the joyous weep of heaven's happy tears and perhaps ... A dance ... in the soft summer rain. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Pick 8, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 6th Place ~ in the "A Rainy Day" Poetry Contest, Sara Kendrick, Judge & Sponsor. * I chose picture number five *

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Date: 4/11/2020 10:14:00 PM
I love the halcyon days you express with your wonderful metaphors Greg. Congratulations on your second placement with this lovely poem that takes me back in time! Have a very Happy Easter my friend! xxoo
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Date: 10/8/2018 12:14:00 PM
Somehow this takes me back to Neil Sedaka and his song, Laughter in the Rain, circa 1966. If you have never heard it, google it. It is another winner, just like yours! Best wishes, Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon ... I am first-and-foremost a musician/songwriter, and I have played that song on stage many times, and always loved it! Blessings, friend! :-)
Date: 10/8/2018 8:39:00 AM
Gregory, I enjoyed reading your work. It is sad and lonely to loose someone you love so dearly but it is good to have pleasant memories about them and to relive events in the life you shared. Thank you for participating in my contest. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:12:00 AM
Thank you SO much, Sara, I was very pleased with my placement, and so appreciative that you enjoyed my poem. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 10/2/2018 6:00:00 PM
SO lovely and moving, Greg! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:11:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Janice! :-) <3
Date: 9/30/2018 1:06:00 AM
I adore Jane Austin. Your poem celebrates the kind of fun she might write about Greg. I always enjoy your distinctive style of poetry! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:11:00 AM
That's very kind, Connie, thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 9/29/2018 6:20:00 PM
A very fine poem indeed.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, WA - I'm glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 9/29/2018 11:13:00 AM
Love it Gregory, best wishes...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:10:00 AM
Very kind of you, Charlie - thanks! :-)
Date: 9/29/2018 9:56:00 AM
Beautifully written. Well done :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi! :-) <3

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