A Moment's Rain
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( Painting by Andre' Kohn - the Bennet Sisters and Mr Darcy are characters from the classic Jane Austin novel 'Pride & Prejudice' )
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Resting it ever-so-gently on her
shoulder, the young girl twirled
the brightly-colored parasol in her hand
and like a child's pinwheel
it became a blur - a joyous
dizzy dance of vivid rainbow shades ...
Bringing the gloomy air around her
(and the wet sidewalk), to gaudy life ...
the rapid rotations spinning the rain off like a
lawn sprinkler - it was THAT sight
that made her think of her sister and warm
summer showers at the farm ...
They'd put bathing suits on
and dance together among the pear trees
pretending they were the precocious "Bennet" sisters
(vying for the attention of Mr Darcy, of course)
soft grass like a chartreuse carpet
under their tender toes ...
Spinning and giggling and
teasing each other in their horribly feigned
British accents ... oh, for just one more of those
carefree country days - life was anything BUT fanciful now -
private school and obligations and over five
years since her sister had passed ...
But, she was with her, still
and this was her kind of day
she would make the most of it, her beloved
sister's umbrella in her grasp - celebrate life itself
and the joyous weep of heaven's happy
tears and perhaps ...
A dance ... in the soft summer rain.
~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Strand Pick 8, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.
~ 6th Place ~ in the "A Rainy Day" Poetry Contest, Sara Kendrick, Judge & Sponsor.
* I chose picture number five *
Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden | Year Posted 2018
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