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A Moment So Fine

Two white clouds, float in open blue sky Bright white as snow is, in the sun Moving ever so slowly, with no effort to try No reason to rush, without reason to run Two white clouds, float in open blue sky Shining down upon me with their design A peaceful decoration shows me why Each day can be special, with a moment so fine Heidi Sands 5/29/22

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Date: 8/4/2022 6:13:00 PM
Special moments found in nature, Lovely write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/5/2022 3:33:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/12/2022 12:34:00 PM
"A Moment So Fine" is a peaceful write. I love to watch the clouds. I also like to find shapes in them. Have a blessed day....................
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2022 4:55:00 AM
I enjoy that too Paula. Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments :)
Date: 6/10/2022 9:31:00 AM
Yes... a moment... that changes everything there after... forever... Well written my friend. I enjoyed this one a lot. Ann
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/10/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Ann. I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: 5/30/2022 6:07:00 AM
A delightful moment of joy--floating in the sky--wonderfully captured, Heidi. Enjoyed the voice of your poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. It was a pleasant, peaceful scene to see. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

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