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A moment of thought we now share Twisting itself around your heart Into the future now I stare Dreaming of tomorrow's fresh start Don't know exactly what it is A moment of thought we now share Began when we had that first kiss Showing me that you really care Nothing in my soul says beware No warnings of the heart felt pain A moment of thought we now share How long will fantasy remain Where does it end, the path unknown I reach out to you, you're not there Only part of me have I shown A moment of thought we now share Penned 31 January 2014 Contest : Collaboration between Wayland Bunch and Seren Roberts

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Date: 2/15/2014 3:55:00 PM
congrads in the contest serene!
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Date: 2/11/2014 6:38:00 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Seren and Wayland. This form required a lot of communication, I'm sure, but it blends perfectly! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 2/1/2014 6:43:00 AM
Wow, this is an incredible write my friend! You have written a fantastic collaboration...I can't tell where one poet ends and the other begins it's so seamlessly blended together! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/1/2014 9:10:00 PM
Thank you Russell, will add both our names after the judging.

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