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A Moment Longer

"a moment longer" before you leave grant me a kiss for us both to wear and stay a moment longer while within warmth of arms and chest caress my soul and stay a moment longer while being dangerously near you lets sing together "Something Good" and stay a moment longer when thinking of us hold the thought and stay a moment longer SkyWatcher - 05-10-17

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White Wolf

Date: 5/10/2017 9:35:00 PM

If only some moments could last forever! Thank goodness for memories! A most beautiful entry, Lisa! Enjoy your day/night

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 4:09:00 AM

Good Evening White Wolf. Yes, thank goodness for memories is right. The memories is what makes it last. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/10/2017 7:20:00 PM

You bring hope where there was only despair, and love where there was loneliness. Emile.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 4:08:00 AM

Morning Emile. My goodness. Thank you Thank you. May all have love and know of love. Never do I take your generosity lightly. Have a wonderful day and I will see you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 5/10/2017 2:11:00 PM

This is so beautiful, so full of love and passion. I can see you dance together on the music, Lisa. This is lovely and expressive.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 2:27:00 PM

Hi Penguin. Thank you Thank you. If that image and thought came to mind or if the words gave that feeling than I did my job which makes me happy. Honestly. Coming from you I'm honored regarding the expression. I hope so. Have a wonderful night. It's been a long day so I am closing up for the night thus I'm glad I saw your review and words. I hope you accomplished all you needed to accomplish today as well. I will see you tomorrow. Night...

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/10/2017 1:56:00 PM

I love the repetition in your poem and how you gently weave 'you' 'me' and 'us'. It is done with beauty, tenderness and that unassuming romantic flare that never fails to deeply touch the reader/listener . . . for this poem could be a song:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 2:30:00 PM

Top of The Evening Anne-Marie. Hi. Thank you for mentioning the repetition. I'm actually a fan of repetition in entries I know there are some who aren't and who say there is no place for it. But.....I'm honored also with the thought and mention of this possibly being a song. How grand is that. Very. Thank you Thank you. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page. Amities back to you as well.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/10/2017 1:13:00 PM

Romance plays her lovely tune here Lisa

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 2:31:00 PM

Good Afternoon Tim. Yes it does. Hi. Thank you so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed the entry and thank you for such a fabulous response. Never do I take your visits or reviews lightly. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/10/2017 9:40:00 AM

This is an amazing beautiful romantic.poem dear...A fave

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 12:34:00 PM

Good Evening Charmaine. My goodness thank you over an over. Honestly. I'm pleased you liked this little entry. Your generosity is not taken lightly Charmaine. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/10/2017 9:34:00 AM

It sounds like a love song to me. As I was reading your poetry, I felt a hug from my imaginary boyfriend.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 12:32:00 PM

Hi Darlene Good Afternoon. He He. That was cute and funny. Thank you so much It if gave and felt as a hug than I am pleased. Honestly. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Sara Ella

Date: 5/10/2017 8:26:00 AM

I love this - the emotions are all there and it warms the heart <3 :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 12:30:00 PM

Hello Sara. It is your review that I love. Thank you so much. I hope this day finds you well. May all be blessed with love. Have a wonderful night. I will see you on your page.

Chris Green

Date: 5/10/2017 7:32:00 AM

"Something tells me I'm into something good" That is the perfect theme song for your poetry my friend because I always find "Something good" when I come here. Well actually something amazing, but that is not a song title that I know of. You do love poetry so well Lisa. It is easy to feel your heart in your words. This one really sings to me.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 2:53:00 PM

Hi Chris. I'm actually about to close the computer for the night. However I have one last word to your thought of the music being in your head. My word is this (ha ha ha ha ha - ha ha) song in a tune of course. Have a wonderful night and thank you again. See you tomorrow.

Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 8:10:00 AM

I had a feeling it was that "Something Good" but hey, The Herman's Hermits weren't bad at all and I will thank myself, now I have that song stuck in my head too. :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 7:57:00 AM

allow me to simply say thank you

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2017 7:54:00 AM

Hello Chris. Morning. Oh I love that song also and now am singing to it. (thanks a lot lol) The song I have in mind here is the one from The Sound of Music with Maria and the Captain. Now with all sincerity thank you ever so much time over time for your continued generous support. Your words are a gift coming from the writer/poet/composer that you are. And this is no lol or ha ha. Have a wonderful morning and day Chris. I'm off to the races as they say but will return later on.