A Mirage That Elapsed !

A Mirage That Elapsed

Early in the morning I was suddenly awoken

From that of a sound of passing eager merchants toiling along

Through a mirage that elapsed,
For all that anyone truly has to do is just ask ?
Through a papal vow one can't look back at the toil of the plow,
Still there are many tormentors inside !

~
Sort of a field of dreams where everyone runs away to go hide,

With the blue green eyes all had come as a sweet surprise,
Stay away from those feminists for all it's the devil in disguise..,
Tormented from the inner silence to it's plausible given lies,
A given mirage that had elapsed through that pivotal shade of scorn,

~
Many thereby having pierced themselves through,
Just to curse that actual day they were born ?
Sort of like Ben Laden in drag,
Will very often sit back with our pride and wave the flag,

A lone hooded monk was being briefed on what it is that he had to say..,

That's when a midget **** star was discovered 
It was a mirage that elapsed;
Although for the very moment it may had seemed,
That many were getting away with a free pass ?

Yet pay day is coming soon !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/8/2012 7:59:00 AM
Hi Mario, Had you intended to enter this poem in my tribute to missing Soupers? I do not see how this fits... was it an accidental placement? Your poem is about scorn, lies, devils... umm, ????? Please withdraw you entry. Thank you. Cyndi
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:32:00 AM
hey Mario congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Tracie's "Write like an Egyptian" contest Mario. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Mario
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:13:00 PM
Congrats Mario on fifth place win with this dynamic delight ..luv..
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Date: 8/24/2011 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your 5th place win in my contest Mario with this amazing piece xxx
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:18:00 AM
May your weekend be one of amazing inspiration Mario. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:26:00 PM
Unique write my friend...
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