A Memory of Snow

It's the first snowfall of the year
And it takes me back....

I remember the first time I rode her in the snow,
So afraid she'd slip.
She didn't want to go out
But we both needed some fresh air and exercise.
Her ears laid flat when she saw the saddle.
She was not impressed.
I think she had hoped I was just bringing a treat.

The snow wasn't deep.
A few wayward snowflakes, stragglers,
Were still falling.
So I saddled her and off we went.
Avoiding paved roads
Where she would be more likely to slip.
We stayed to the dirt road running past the house
And a few familiar trails.

I believe she aimed for low hanging boughs.
I was covered in snow in the first twenty minutes.
My punishment for this silly idea, I guess.
Soon her ears picked up and her step became more sprightly.
She, too, was getting into the spirit of it.

Only an hour, then back to the barn.
No falls, a couple minor slides in footing
Which she handled like a pro.

There I brushed her down
And she attacked apples with a renewed appetite.
The next day the rain washed it all away,
Except for the memory.....
                 it remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Very pervasive descriptiveness here. It has been a long time since I rode a horse.
Flach Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Wow, what a nice picture this paints. Riding in the snow on a sure-footed horse can be a refreshing and invigorating experience. A lovely and well written story, Francine - thanks for sharing. Joe
Sweetheart Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Lovely flow of words Francine.. making the snow so inviting luv.. enjoyed ..
Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 3:21 PM
Lovely story Francine, as I read I could picture your words, just wonderful as always >> James :)
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 9:18 AM
You have told an enthralling story in this write, Francine
Taylor Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 8:12 PM
Excellent story, Francine. Enjoyed. Thanks for your kind remarks. My poem doesn't qualify for the contest - too long and not funny- but thanks for the thought. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
Falotico Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Very nice Francine, always a pleasure to flow with you through your poems...always Michael
Milgate Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 11:46 AM
A nice poem story about her, what a wonderful thing to have closeness like that which these beautiful regal animals.
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November 20, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Nice one,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 10:55 AM
a finely-written, intricate story that enthralls me no end, francine! thanks for coming around to comment on my pensee... warmest, nette
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