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A Memory of Reminiscing In the Sewing Room

Sewing machine long idle, gathered dust inside the room my sister liked the best. Old fabric pieces lay where they’d been left. I let my hand upon soft velvet rest. I lit a candle like she used to do nights of our youth when she’d gone there to keep her mind off her young groom who’d gone to war and not returned. Sometimes I’d hear her weep. The war years seemed like only yesterday when mother , then my sister, passed away. All those years she’d sewn for pay, heart-broken! She’d chosen - with our mom - alone to stay. My fingers lingered on the velvet meant to have been worn by her so as to spark romance with her lost love. Unsewn it lay. The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark. April 28, 2018 for Viv Wigley's One nine and sixteen poetry contest (total fiction except I have a sister who loved to sew!)

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Date: 7/12/2018 8:56:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you again on your win again! :) A great poem, well done!
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Date: 7/11/2018 10:01:00 AM
You won! A great second round for this lovely write, my poetry sister!
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:51:00 PM
as a sewer, I enjoyed this - evocative and I'm sure someone's story.
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Date: 7/10/2018 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations! Well deserved. I really liked this poem. All of the emotions by your chosen words.
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Date: 7/10/2018 2:12:00 PM
Congrats on your number 1 win, Andrea
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Date: 7/10/2018 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Nice to read this again.
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:19:00 PM
Poignant and beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 7/10/2018 12:06:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:43:00 PM
Great tale! Congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2018 1:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:05:00 PM
What a story you have woven here, Andrea. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
Beautiful piece, dear Andrea, so reminiscent of the period pieces set during the war years that I enjoy reading! Big congraatulations on your win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/2/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. A great story and a winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea! Well done. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2018 12:00:00 PM
Bravo Andrea no one can hold a candle to your amazing writing my friend, love the way you included the candle at the beginning and end of the piece:-)Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2018 11:35:00 AM
Great write, Andrea, I applaud your inclusion of the candle early and its return at the conclusion. Super piece and kudos on your placement.
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:28:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:31:00 AM
I'm in tears, well done.
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Date: 5/2/2018 6:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea, with his lovely piece.
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Date: 4/29/2018 11:37:00 PM
A winner. A great story and you write them so well. :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:57:00 AM
Great take on the contest prompt, Andrea - and so very sad. I find this contest with the prescribed lines very difficult.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:27:00 AM
This is wonderful Andrea, fiction maybe? yet so true to life and lives of so many..
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:22:00 AM
You made fiction read like a real family story..sign of a great poem..the three given lines blend in seamlessly..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:06:00 PM
I love these types of poems! I miss you all in soup as I have been around as much!!! So tonight I decided to come around and read my favorites!!! Hugs!!
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Date: 4/28/2018 6:57:00 PM
Sure to top the winner's list, Andrea.
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