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A Melancholy Song

Though warmth may linger through your final days, old Sun is waning, yet he still seems strong! You're passing on, and trees are set ablaze. September, you’re a melancholy song.

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Date: 8/30/2020 4:39:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 PM
Andrea, all readers are staggered. An observation of end of mortal experience, your poem sets it on fire, rampant emotion among the calm of passing to a place of no pain. A highly deserved Win, this is the top for me.
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Date: 8/28/2020 6:18:00 PM
Always a prime penning from you. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 8/28/2020 6:01:00 PM
Congrats for being on the winner's list, Andrea.
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:18:00 PM
Big congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Andrea in a great win in Greg's contest!
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Date: 8/10/2020 8:54:00 AM
Digging deep into the vaults, I see. This is a winner to me.
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Date: 8/9/2020 7:26:00 AM
HAVE YOU DISCUSSED THIS WITH AUGUST???? Nicely reworked lines from a previous work.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/9/2020 11:05:00 AM
August is the "pre" melancholy song!!
Date: 8/9/2020 5:19:00 AM
Enjoyed the sound of this ode to September.
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Date: 8/9/2020 4:51:00 AM
Wow. this is amazing. I simply love it. You're such a inspiration in words. God bless you, sweet lady
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Date: 8/9/2020 3:12:00 AM
The gateway to autumn my favourite season. A poem in its own right Andrea. Good luck Tom
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Date: 8/8/2020 11:10:00 PM
Wonderful lines Andrea.. It made me read the original.. Good luck..
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:04:00 PM
September is a "melancholy song" this year for sure. Well penned.
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:32:00 PM
Andrea, What a nice song of September you have created here. -Richard
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:02:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... of course, from the vibrant to the rustic season with its bounty - nice writing Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 8/8/2020 7:43:00 PM
Wonderful to read Andrea...Luv Michael
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