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A Melancholy Song

Though warmth may linger through your final days, 

old Sun is waning, yet he still seems strong! 

You're passing on, and trees are set ablaze. 

September, you’re a melancholy song. 

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2020

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Beata Agustin Date: 8/30/2020 4:39:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Login to Reply

Sigrid Ermine Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 PM Andrea, all readers are staggered. An observation of end of mortal experience, your poem sets it on fire, rampant emotion among the calm of passing to a place of no pain. A highly deserved Win, this is the top for me. Login to Reply

Greg Gaul Date: 8/28/2020 6:18:00 PM Always a prime penning from you. Congratulations on your placement. Login to Reply

Jenna Logan Date: 8/28/2020 6:01:00 PM Congrats for being on the winner's list, Andrea. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 8/28/2020 5:18:00 PM Big congrats, Andrea! Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/28/2020 5:13:00 PM Congrats Andrea in a great win in Greg's contest! Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 8/10/2020 8:54:00 AM Digging deep into the vaults, I see. This is a winner to me. Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 8/9/2020 7:26:00 AM HAVE YOU DISCUSSED THIS WITH AUGUST???? Nicely reworked lines from a previous work. Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2020 11:05:00 AM August is the "pre" melancholy song!!

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/9/2020 5:19:00 AM Enjoyed the sound of this ode to September. Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/9/2020 4:51:00 AM Wow. this is amazing. I simply love it. You're such a inspiration in words. God bless you, sweet lady Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/9/2020 3:12:00 AM The gateway to autumn my favourite season. A poem in its own right Andrea. Good luck Tom Login to Reply

Jenish Somadas Date: 8/8/2020 11:10:00 PM Wonderful lines Andrea.. It made me read the original.. Good luck.. Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 8/8/2020 9:04:00 PM September is a "melancholy song" this year for sure. Well penned. Login to Reply

Quoth Theraven Date: 8/8/2020 8:32:00 PM Andrea, What a nice song of September you have created here. -Richard Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 8/8/2020 8:02:00 PM Hello Andrea ... of course, from the vibrant to the rustic season with its bounty - nice writing Andrea - Lindsay Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 8/8/2020 7:43:00 PM Wonderful to read Andrea...Luv Michael Login to Reply