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A Meeting of Chance

One night long ago I saw a lovely creature, It was like gazing at a fine piece of art. I got lost in his eyes and every other feature, One night long ago, I saw a lovely creature. I was an eager student, and he was a teacher, In that moment in time he had my heart. One night long ago, I saw a lovely creature, It was like gazing at a fine piece of art. Alexis Y. 05/22/2021

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Date: 5/23/2021 2:55:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive, Alexis. Janice
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Date: 5/23/2021 8:07:00 AM
Alexis where do you find your topics, so different so well penned , is this perhaps religious or about a fine piece of manly art? Take care always, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/23/2021 6:51:00 AM
An excellent poem, Alexis. Hope you got my last soup mail. Hugs.
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:26:00 AM
What a tender and romantic Triolet, dearest, Alexis. I loved it! Hugs xxx
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Date: 5/23/2021 3:40:00 AM
Every now and again someone does catch your eye, was it love at first sight? Tom
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Date: 5/23/2021 3:03:00 AM
You did an excellent job with this one. I don't know whether to fear this creature or to want to slip around and see it. Your work has good flow and good use of the repeat lines. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/22/2021 11:20:00 PM
This is a beautiful triolet. The sponsor set a 20 winners. I think she should revise. So many beautiful triolets. Hugs.
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Date: 5/22/2021 11:42:00 PM
Hi Victor, Thank you so much. I agree; I submitted another triolet for the contest. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

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