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A Meandering River - Ziket

Life, a meandering river, Not all pebbles smooth. August 13, 2020 For 2-line Poem - Ziket Poetry Contest First line - 8 syllables, Second line - 5 syllables Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/18/2020 11:31:00 PM
Mesmerizing piece!! Reminds me of one of my favourite poems, "Dreams" ... :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2020 4:21:00 AM
Thank you so much. Yes, you are right. That poem is my personal favourite too. Appreciate your encouraging words. Love and hugs, Mala
Date: 8/18/2020 3:51:00 PM
wow, GREAT imagery and ziket!! Congrats to you.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Appreciate your lovely comments. Love, Mala
Date: 8/18/2020 2:44:00 PM
so true Malabika, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Life is better with kind friends! Hugs, Mala
Date: 8/18/2020 11:56:00 AM
yeah but why do ya hafta step on so many when wading in life's current
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 12:25:00 PM
That’s right, I wonder too! Thank you for reading the poem. Very kind of you!
Date: 8/18/2020 7:46:00 AM
Oh lovely done! Not all pebbles smooth indeed. Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Dear Poet. Appreciate your inspiring words. Hugs, Mala