Meandering River - Ziket

Life, a meandering river, Not all pebbles smooth. August 13, 2020 For 2-line Poem - Ziket Poetry Contest First line - 8 syllables, Second line - 5 syllables Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Jcb Brul

Date: 8/18/2020 11:31:00 PM

Mesmerizing piece!! Reminds me of one of my favourite poems, "Dreams" ... :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/19/2020 4:21:00 AM

Thank you so much. Yes, you are right. That poem is my personal favourite too. Appreciate your encouraging words. Love and hugs, Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 3:51:00 PM

wow, GREAT imagery and ziket!! Congrats to you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Appreciate your lovely comments. Love, Mala

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2020 2:44:00 PM

so true Malabika, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 4:09:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Life is better with kind friends! Hugs, Mala

John Lawless

Date: 8/18/2020 11:56:00 AM

yeah but why do ya hafta step on so many when wading in life's current

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 12:25:00 PM

That’s right, I wonder too! Thank you for reading the poem. Very kind of you!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/18/2020 7:46:00 AM

Oh lovely done! Not all pebbles smooth indeed. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/18/2020 8:20:00 AM

Thanks so much, Dear Poet. Appreciate your inspiring words. Hugs, Mala