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Meandering River - Ziket

Life, a meandering river, 
                                   Not all pebbles smooth.



 August 13, 2020

 For 2-line Poem - Ziket Poetry Contest
 First line - 8 syllables, Second line - 5 syllables 
     Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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JCB Brul Date: 8/18/2020 11:31:00 PM Mesmerizing piece!! Reminds me of one of my favourite poems, "Dreams" ... :) Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/19/2020 4:21:00 AM Thank you so much. Yes, you are right. That poem is my personal favourite too. Appreciate your encouraging words. Love and hugs, Mala

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/18/2020 3:51:00 PM wow, GREAT imagery and ziket!! Congrats to you. Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/18/2020 4:10:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. Appreciate your lovely comments. Love, Mala

Jan Allison Date: 8/18/2020 2:44:00 PM so true Malabika, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/18/2020 4:09:00 PM Thank you, Jan. Life is better with kind friends! Hugs, Mala

John Lawless Date: 8/18/2020 11:56:00 AM yeah but why do ya hafta step on so many when wading in life's current Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/18/2020 12:25:00 PM That’s right, I wonder too! Thank you for reading the poem. Very kind of you!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 8/18/2020 7:46:00 AM Oh lovely done! Not all pebbles smooth indeed. Congratulations for your win! xomo Login to Reply Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 8/18/2020 8:20:00 AM Thanks so much, Dear Poet. Appreciate your inspiring words. Hugs, Mala