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For a significant length of time, they swim in synch. Then rapidly fluttering their fins like the wings of hummingbirds, n two sea horses s i p swirling and swirling together as two become one

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Date: 6/2/2025 12:18:00 AM
I love your arrangement of lines and how youv written the hummingbird line especially, which contest is this for? Youv definitely delivered a gorgeous take! Best wishes
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/2/2025 12:24:00 AM
It just got Hm from Brian. I am on a losing streak lately
Date: 6/1/2025 6:35:00 PM
The picture warmed my heart so much! - then for the reading, so sweet
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Date: 6/1/2025 7:50:00 AM
Wow! Impressive and amazing picture of God's wonderful creature you've painted in your creative and beautiful words my dear poet friend Andrea. I love it. Thanks a lot for sharing. Good luck in the contest and God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs
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Date: 5/31/2025 6:56:00 PM
Beyond cute, Andrea. Your significant wants a 't'. Miss you ... CayCay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/31/2025 11:16:00 PM
Thanks. Also I noticed my spin word got put out of alignment so I re-entered the contest. Hope it makes it.
Date: 5/31/2025 4:51:00 PM
very cool, andrea! i enjoyed...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/31/2025 11:16:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 5/31/2025 2:30:00 PM
So lovely composed, enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 5/31/2025 12:41:00 PM
- Cute little horses ...lovely written, Andrea :) - Good luck :) - hugs
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Date: 5/31/2025 10:41:00 AM
What a fun read and creative write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed weekend writing away...............
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/31/2025 10:47:00 AM
for Brian's. Hope he likes it.

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