Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

A Man From Distant Lands

A man from distant lands

Celestial musings that you said to me
Still whisper gently in my memory
Reminding me of our heavenly kiss
Acquiescing to a pull of cherubic bliss.

Nothing has been the same since then
When under the moon we secretly met
For a union of our twilight dreams
Shining under glitter of stellar streams.

Moved by your supernal phrases
I opened the door of loving graces
Riding with you to ethereal places
Singing praises of romantic verses.

When moon so soon left evening sky
And winds shook up stormy clouds 
I saw the retreating distant star
Urging you to exit before too long.

But you stayed put in drenching rain
Sheltering my frame without refrain
As we walked to a peaceful lake
Surrendering to love divinely ornate.

I knew you belonged to distant lands
When soon you left with moon and the stars,
Leaving behind your immortal vibe
Permanently bound with a seraphic tie.

January 4, 2018
Placed 1st: Strand Pick 7 contest by Brian Strand
Placed 5th in Impress Me premiere contest by Skat A

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Valsa George July 23, 2022 at 12:51 AM "Moved by your supernal phrases/ I opened the door of loving graces/ Riding with you to ethereal places/ Singing praises of romantic verses." The beauty of these lines with their end rhymes have left me in a spell of admiration ! Lovely poem, dear Vijay !

Vladislav Raven January 16, 2019 at 9:39 AM Hi Vijay, another excellent write from your golden pen. I do love taking such peaceful walks through the imagery of your words. You have painted such a strong, vivid canvas in this write. This is a dream that stays within the mind. The rhyme, the floe, the rhythm, all excellent as always. You create excellence my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Gregory Richard Barden January 19, 2018 at 11:54 PM Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Vijay - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-) Vijay Pandit January 20, 2018 at 6:30 AM Thank you Greg.

Judith S January 18, 2018 at 12:06 PM Of course I would find you in the winner's listing :) Back to wish you congratulations Vijay!! ~Judy Vijay Pandit January 18, 2018 at 12:36 PM Thank you Judy..appreciate your kind comments.

Line Gauthier January 17, 2018 at 8:25 PM Divine poem. Very well done, Vijay. Congrats on your win. Vijay Pandit January 18, 2018 at 11:46 AM Thank you Line.

Eve Roper January 17, 2018 at 7:38 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit January 18, 2018 at 11:46 AM Thank you Eve.

Skat A January 17, 2018 at 3:45 PM Vijay Pandit, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT Vijay Pandit January 18, 2018 at 11:45 AM Thank you SKAT.

Maria Williams January 14, 2018 at 3:13 AM Beautiful and profound Vijay, sad though the last four lines are they are are still so full of imagery. ...Maria Vijay Pandit January 14, 2018 at 6:47 AM Thank you Maria.

James Swartz January 7, 2018 at 11:36 AM Truly and duly one amazingly romantic write! Great job Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 7, 2018 at 12:14 PM Thank you James.

Paul Callus January 6, 2018 at 4:40 PM Beautiful, romantic and touching. This is what real love is capable of inspiring, Vijay! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM Thank you Paul..enjoyed reading your comments.

Akkina Downing January 5, 2018 at 5:09 PM I read this twice, because I love it! Truly a beautiful poem... hugs and smiles :) Vijay Pandit January 6, 2018 at 5:56 PM Thank you Akkina..enjoyed reading your comments.

Joseph May January 5, 2018 at 4:46 PM Very nicely penned Vijay... Vijay Pandit January 6, 2018 at 5:55 PM Thank you Joseph.

Harry Horsman January 5, 2018 at 4:31 PM Beautiful Vijay, a wonderful poem.. Vijay Pandit January 6, 2018 at 5:55 PM Thank you harry.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 5, 2018 at 10:17 AM Exaltation to romanticism my dear friend, Vijay! A hymn to love! Vijay Pandit January 5, 2018 at 4:15 PM Thank you Demetrios.

Eve Roper January 4, 2018 at 11:11 PM Lovely imagery, Vijay, and so very romantic hugs Eve Vijay Pandit January 5, 2018 at 8:07 AM Thank you Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2018 at 2:54 PM - Oh ... this is a beautiful and romantic gem, Vijay - Always have your door open for love :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 4:55 PM Thank you Anne-Lise..always happy to read your comments.

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2018 at 2:23 PM a great man leaves his tracks behind... remarkable composition, vijay... huggs Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 4:54 PM Thank you nette...enjoyed reading your comments.

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 4, 2018 at 2:03 PM You weaved the words w/a golden pen loom, Vijay! ... For a union of our twilight dreams. Shining under glitter of stellar streams. Pure romantic poetry. Ethereal imagery. Love and joy always. Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 4:54 PM Thank you Freddie..you are so kind..enjoyed reading your comments.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 4, 2018 at 11:30 AM swoonworthy pen my friend. Just wonderful. Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 12:55 PM Thank you Maureen.

Silent One January 4, 2018 at 9:19 AM A dream that you never want to end.. and excellent poem that rhymes and flows very well.. I have written a few on this subject... Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:15 AM Many thanks Silent One..appreciate your kind words.

Mike Gentile January 4, 2018 at 9:17 AM Very Romantic, Vijay! You've created an ethereal portrait of love !! Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:15 AM Enjoyed reading your comments..many thanks, Mike.

Judith S January 4, 2018 at 8:10 AM So beautifully penned Vijay! A lovely dreamland of bliss :) Best, Judy Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:14 AM Thank you Judy--enjoyed your comments.

Arturo Michael January 4, 2018 at 7:56 AM You're poetry swinging...Full of creativity for 2018... Love it...Keep it coming...I like what you're doing...All blessings to you Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:13 AM Enjoyed your comments Arturo..many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong January 4, 2018 at 7:55 AM Your beautiful poem is a tribute to blissful love Vijay! Bravo! : ) Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:13 AM Appreciate the kind feedback..thank you Connie.

Heidi Sands January 4, 2018 at 7:36 AM Wow Vijay. So well written and filled with emotion the reader can feel. :) Vijay Pandit January 4, 2018 at 11:12 AM Thank you Heidi..enjoyed reading your comments.