A Man and His Tree

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Armed with chainsaws in the field, two young men are shirtless guests
with shoulders bronzed by sun and sweat.
The timbre in the August sun has scattered birds and stirred unrest

   The tree they'll slay has leaves of gold, 
   lacing branches frail and old,   - but now its time is spent

Rising from his afghan nest, a man peers out the window glass
to witness as the death unfolds.   
As one who brought the seedling home, he waits to see the giant fall
He holds his breath, but not his tears.  Age and illness hems the years.

And just as earth might moan in pain, the tree comes tumbling down

There was a day, not long before, ....before his war began                     
Back then he could lift a saw like that, ..hold it skillfully, carefully, casually
Angle down, - angle up, - cut a wedge, - hear it crack

Now there's pathos in dust-driven clouds
that shadows an earth that has lost its sun
It trembles now to catch its breath.
And branch by branch it lays to rest the leaves of courage, a golden crest,
that was shelter, home, a fortress blessed, a place to lean to find solace

A tree, ...  nor a man cannot be defined 
by disease, confinement, by age or time

A tree falls down.  It is nature's plan
to open the field, while clearing the land
What came before, grows new today,
The void that's left cannot be filled,
and tears we shed cannot be stilled

His leave will make a louder sound
The dust will rise.  Trees burn to ash
What matters most is never lost

Oh yes,  how it shatters the fragile heart!
Oh God, how it matters, how could it not?

- But, the man and the tree have earned a rest                                               
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6/6/17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/7/2020 7:57:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE! dear Carrie, The tree...such a brilliant metaphor...equal to Poe's RAVEN. You are...as I have said before...in a league of your own.
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Elaine George
Date: 9/7/2020 7:58:00 AM
This is one for my favorite list.
Date: 6/23/2020 5:36:00 AM
excellent feelings ......compassionate writings... delight to read
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:39:00 AM
A nice piece. Keep it up.
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Date: 6/25/2017 11:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem Carrie. love phyl
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Date: 6/17/2017 11:27:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Carrie. It epitomizes a documentary I saw when an earthquake destroyed the land and trees and sometime later all grew new and beautiful. God's relation to trees and man is relevant. great poem!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/17/2017 11:58:00 AM
I'm grateful that you have seen value in this poem. It is terribly relevant to me right now, as I am losing my brother to cancer, and he watches from the window as his own tree has toppled down. Thank you
Date: 6/8/2017 7:37:00 PM
Carrie, as usual, you have written a tender and stunning poem. A brother as strong and dear as this tree. GREAT dedication.
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Date: 6/6/2017 5:54:00 PM
Powerful poem dear poet with a great metaphor, that's why the word loss is so strong it pierces the heart
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/6/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Frederic. This one was painful to write. It is real, and is happening at this very time. Thanks again for your friendship.
Date: 6/6/2017 5:25:00 PM
It always matters to someone. Emotional read, Mrs Carrie. "The tears we shed cannot be stilled" So well written!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/6/2017 5:27:00 PM
Thank you very much, Daniel.
Date: 6/6/2017 5:21:00 PM
Oh Carrie, I was complete absorbed in the feelings expressed in this compassionate poem that has such a clear and beautiful message. You are such a wonderful talented poet. A cherished tribute for the love you have for your brother! Blessings, Connie : )
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/6/2017 5:26:00 PM
Connie, you are always so kind, and thoughtful. Not only to my poetry, but to me personally. I thank you. This is a hard time, I am losing someone who I love very much . Thank you again
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