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A Maiden - Anacreontic Verse

In the fields of green         
Sings the sweetly
Breathing flute
Paths of mistral's play
A maiden fair 
Her eyes of blue
Pinched cheeks of rose
Gold woven strands
 Pearls, in yellow hair
Which caught the eye
Then his heart
A love that could
Never breathe
Of maiden fair
For tears that drip
Bring my love to me
Shadowy floods
From tempests clouds
Drape the spirit of
Huge moons wax and wane
Again and again  
Clouding forward
Left broken spirit
Sweetly singing
In hope she'll come
In morning rising
Butterflies tease
The cherry with its
Ripened blush
Bring my love to me

1/3/2016

Poetry Contest : Anacreontic Verse 2  
Sponsor: Edward Ebbs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/28/2016 9:25:00 PM
EVE, CONGRATS, ON YOUR Anacreontic Verse 2- WIN. Luv ~LINDA~
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/28/2016 11:31:00 PM
Thank you so much hugs Eve
Date: 1/20/2016 12:00:00 PM
real winner, eve.. congrats of this fine win..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/20/2016 5:01:00 AM
How lovely Eve.. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma ! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2016 9:17:00 PM
Eve,,, Congratulationson your Anacreontic Verse 2 win. Luv *Skat...
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Skat! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
so so beautiful Eve congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2016 11:11:00 AM
Poetical and beautiful, Eve! I like the romantic touch which you give it. Congratulations on a most worthy win. // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/19/2016 9:10:00 AM
Well done, I enjoyed your winning piece.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Richard! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/18/2016 10:55:00 PM
Congrats Eve, thank you for entering :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Edward, for the honor I love writing for this contest! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2016 5:00:00 PM
Great write, thanks for sharing............A.M.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/27/2016 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi! Hugs Eve
Date: 1/4/2016 5:10:00 AM
So lovely...never tried this form before. Best wishes in the contest, Eve. Blessings and hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2016 8:40:00 AM
Hello dear friend, my first try. I just glad it came together. I'm learning :)
Date: 1/4/2016 1:33:00 AM
Romantic, my dear....Love that last line ending. Soupmail.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/4/2016 8:39:00 AM
Oh, thank you:) you are my life- saver Hugs dear friend
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