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A Magical Trip To the Garden of Eden Part2

All creatures big and small, including the ravenous raptors, Adam and God, together, working in the Garden, My happy day had only begun. I saw it all. God taught Adam: living, using, and replenishing, to make earth a haven. I asked God, “Is the Garden of Eden an enclosed environment?” Methane almost took my life away, today, in the dinosaur's den. “Yes. Oxygen is in the Garden, and there, Adam and Eve will survive. Earth atmosphere beyond the garden must mature and amend. “Human life is not yet possible on the outside of the Garden.” God formed all living things from genetic dust created on Day 3 and Day 5. Light and logic started flashing through my head as bright as neon. Planet Earth changes creature by creature for eons; when, each can survive. Oh magic rock, a gift from God, within my hand, Thank you for taking me to where life was born. To see creation first hand and to finally understand that Magnificent creations, God's genetic strands, were AFTER Day 7 FORMED. I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over. A trip through time left the beautiful Garden of Eden behind, far behind And I return, alas, back to the year 2009, to my own field of clover.

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Date: 11/10/2009 4:48:00 AM
Amazing. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 7:59:00 PM
Makes me think of the smooth stones of David. May I use your rocks. Maybe I might slay the giant! Smooth flowing write Dane. God bless you, it was fun writing with you. When is the post? Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2009 8:36:00 AM
A trip through evolution in epic fashion....Nice......:JP]
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Date: 11/9/2009 8:15:00 AM
A great story, Dane Anne! ~Good luck in the contest, both parts were captivating! ~ Carrie
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