Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Etheree

A Magical Touch

If you touch a thing often, it will shine
And things live with love, gets a new life
If you touch them every day.
Yoga combines both physical
And spiritual touch
Giving a new life
To catharsis
Of body,
Mind and
Self.
Feel                         
No love                          
Without touch.
Touch Guitar's strings           
Music is produced.                    
A poet touches words        
Inspired by thoughts and feelings
To scribe a poem of delight.    
Strong air produced sound of tree branches  
The things touched with love ought to have a voice.

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September 10, 2014
Form: Etheree
(85 words – 110 syllables)
First Place win
Contest:Double Reverse Etheree by Shadow Hamilton

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Skat A May 27, 2015 at 4:59 AM Amazing

Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 10:47 AM beautiful etheree, Dr. Ram! Congratulations!

Margaret Foster October 4, 2014 at 4:10 AM Congratulations on your win with this fine verse, it was a pleasure to read.

Kayod5 Kayode October 4, 2014 at 3:56 AM Congrats Dr. ,no wonder you keep on touching me that one day I will get poetic voice.Thank you Sir.

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2014 at 11:43 PM this one is very deserving of a first place, Dr. Ram. Big congrats to you.

Seren Roberts October 3, 2014 at 11:02 PM Ram this is such a good read, congrats....Seren

Joyce Johnson October 3, 2014 at 9:14 PM Really loving and wise thoughts you have produced on the virtue of touch.. Congratulations. .

Joseph May October 3, 2014 at 8:56 PM Congrats on a fine win Dr Ram

Brenda Meier-Hans October 3, 2014 at 8:25 PM This lovely poem has been touched with your heart and carries a beautiful message. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Faye Gibson October 3, 2014 at 8:20 PM Oh, I do like this one. Congrats, Dr. Ram.

Shadow Hamilton October 3, 2014 at 6:52 PM very wise words Ram delightful poem congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 2:07 AM Thanks, Shadow for the appreciation of my poem

Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 6:32 PM wonderful write Dr Mehta, I too love the last line:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2014 at 10:31 PM wow, you did great with this one, Dr. Ram. Very well crafted double etheree. I love its message.

Robin Davis September 14, 2014 at 7:36 AM Dr. Ram These words are so splendidly written and full of joy and sweetness.. Love in any form is the best thing we can give from our hearts. Thank you for the great comment on my Burning Pain poem.

Robert Lindley September 10, 2014 at 6:22 PM Looks like a hard form to write but your write made it look easy. You never broke the flow and the feel carried all the way from start to finish.. Bravo!! I am giving this one a top 7 rating.. Good luck in the contest..

Lucilla Carrillo September 10, 2014 at 4:33 PM Dr. Ram; I really liked this poem. The magical touch of love will always work. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 10, 2014 at 11:10 AM Ur writes r wonderful Dr Ram n yet another wonder here! Gl in contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2014 at 10:19 AM Love the last line plus the different ways you exemplify magical touch..:) excellent!

Sara Kendrick September 10, 2014 at 10:17 AM "The things touched with love ought to have a voice" I was touched by this line ..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis September 10, 2014 at 10:06 AM Your poem, touching, majestic and profound. One may write volumes just being inspired by the last line. I have a feeling, an epigram of mine, will be on the way soon! Excellent in every line! Good luck!

Tim Smith September 10, 2014 at 8:49 AM Great job and great content....cheers Tim

Barbara Gorelick September 10, 2014 at 8:29 AM Good one Dr Ram! I agree, the last line is a keeper..BG

Casarah Nance September 10, 2014 at 7:06 AM I love it! The last line, great! I foresee this on the winners list, excellent my friend :)