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As twilight sets the scene, dusk readies night, etching flocks of geese on a crimson sky. And placid waves send a ribbon of light shimmering across the breadth of a sigh. Darkness detects lovers in the shadow tangled in love's strings, like marionettes. And the profiles of a girl and her beau take form in the essence of silhouettes. Soulmates engaged in a passionate kiss are oblivious to the sands of time. And lost between euphoria and bliss, experience the meaning of sublime. Framed by the aura of a sanguine sun, two shadows mingle, then merge into one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/11/2018 9:43:00 PM
An awesome poem, Emile. Every line is sublime. Congrats on your most deserved podium finish.
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Date: 4/12/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Date: 4/3/2018 3:17:00 AM
Great imagery you've penned, Emile. I especially like the second verse. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Artsie, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
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Date: 4/2/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Susan, As always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem; especially etching flocks of geese; so slyly poetic. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 11:15:00 AM
Your last line, 'Nature won't be outdone', brill, congratulations on your placement Emile... Mick
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Mick, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Emile :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 8:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 8:15:00 AM
A gem of a poem Emile, beautiful work. Congratulations on your win! All the best, mo xo!
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2018 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem Emile..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2018 2:20:00 PM
Wow Emile. This is perfect for the contest. Beautiful . I am sure it will do well :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, I always appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

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