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I found myself walking in a green magical forest, with bright flowers and creeping vines everywhere; the trees were breathing and the flowers whispering, and those vines were moving- twining toward me. I had gone to bed and grandma had tucked me in, under my patchwork quilt I lay on my pillows; I really loved my attic room and all my toys and pets, especially Flippy Flop my cat and Dippy Dot my dog . . . I read for a bit under my fancy lamp until my eyes closed, then Teddy, nudged me and said- lets go on a journey so, off we went with everyone following, oh dear, I said, there was Flippy Flop, Dippy Dot, Teddy and all my toys too. The rabbits, dolls, puppet soldiers, and three white horses, we walked along- a long parade into the magical forest; suddenly, my blue bird was flying over and a fairy doll too, we went deeper and deeper into the green, oh dear, I said. Along the way we stopped to chat with the trees and flowers, the vines caressed us with tickles- little creatures giggled; we saw pretty things like a gang of butterflies fluttering, and hummingbirds whirling their wings so fast we laughed. On and on we went until my eyes closed because I was sleepy, Teddy, can we please go home, I miss my bed and pillows . . . In the morning, Teddy was tucked in beside me and I kissed him, Flippy Flop and Dippy Dot guarded me and all my toys watched. Grandma came to wake me, asking sweet- how was your sleep, I answered, GREAT, I went on a journey, and she just smiled; It was time to get up for the day but I could not wait until bedtime, and another journey with my pets, Teddy and my toys following. ________________________ January 24, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/A Magical Journey Copyright Protected, ID 19-1107-663-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, A Fairy Tale For Children sponsor, Eve Roper First Place _______________________________ Submitted to Strand Select G Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 9/26/2021 10:27:00 AM
Aww what a cute sweet magical journey Constance... ENJOYED reading my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/26/2021 5:08:00 PM
Ani, thanks for the compliment, the contest was for a children's poem and this is what I came up with and got First Place ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 2/10/2020 11:38:00 PM
I did - thank you for your understanding Constance! I really did enjoy your journey!
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Date: 2/11/2020 10:01:00 AM
Sam, I knew it was just a typo _Constance
Date: 2/9/2020 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations Eve - wonderful fantasy land you created, a safe place for children of all ages to dream.
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:12:00 AM
Same, I think you mean Constance, but I will take the congratulations anyways _Constance
Date: 2/24/2019 10:01:00 AM
Pure joy and delight! Nicely done, Constance. ~Mark
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:13:00 AM
Mark, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance
Date: 2/24/2019 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I just read your story, and it is delightful. What a beautiful journey. I love the names, flippy flop and dippy dot. My favorite part is when teddy nudged her. I loved every minute of this!
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:15:00 AM
Sherilynn, thanks for the congratulations and compliment on my poem. I took the names Flippy Flop and Dippy Dot from my best friends two cats, I just find those name adorable and thought they would appeal to kids- Constance
Date: 2/24/2019 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Heart, for entering my , “A Fairy Tale for Children” contest. You made me feel like I was the child in the story. The story had great imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:16:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the contest and for my win !
Date: 2/17/2019 8:39:00 PM
Constance, this is lovely. Especially this part, for it is as if you are completely in touch with your child self: "off we went with everyone following, oh dear, I said, there was Flippy Flop, Dippy Dot, Teddy and all my toys too." Lovely!
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:27:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting and for the nice comment, I have no trouble embracing my inner child, that was the best memories I have and as you can tell I have a vivid imagination ~
Date: 1/24/2019 4:47:00 PM
This is so sweet Constance. I know my little 6 and 7 year old granddaughters will love reading this. I will share it with them. This is sure to be a winner with Eve. I loved it! Soup Mail xxoo : )
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Date: 1/25/2019 7:46:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the visit, well that is the ultimate compliment and please let me know what your granddaughters think of it. Well, I hope Eve likes my poem but we never know for sure until the end. But when we enter a contest we cannot be afraid to fail~
Date: 1/24/2019 3:44:00 PM
Oh so glad i've read this wonderful gem...love your journey. Constance.
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Date: 1/25/2019 7:47:00 AM
Harry, thanks for the visit and for the wonderful ~
Date: 1/24/2019 10:42:00 AM
Your memory images are just so warm! Loved it.
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Date: 1/24/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Sun for the compliment!
Date: 1/24/2019 4:27:00 AM
What a wonderful description!
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Date: 1/24/2019 4:30:00 AM
Bobby thanks for the visit and the wonderful !

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