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A Macabre Dance

One starry night, a very long ago it was death who thought to out-drink the poet. Oh, let me pour you, death, a little more of English ale in half with the Dalmore*. Just look at her! As drunken as a Scouse, death sings “Sweet Lucy”, dancing around the house. I bet you’ve never seen her as she stands: the drunken death is dancing on her hands! If not in heaven, you will surely sup in hell**. The blouse undone! The skirt caught up! The drunken Death’s been dancing ever since around Moscow, Paris, Port-au-Prince; the rich men’s villas and the beggars’ shanties… And, by the way, she doesn’t wear panties. * Brand of Scotch whisky. ** William Shakespeare, King Henry VI, Second Part, ACT V, SCENE I. 28.05.2019 Pick A Tile, Vol 5 - Verse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh A Macabre Dance

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Date: 6/25/2019 3:21:00 PM
A terrific poem, Kurt:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 6/25/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thanks, Edward. Godspeed in your endeavours.
Date: 5/28/2019 6:46:00 PM
This is intelligently and creatively blended for a good enthralling time to be had during the read, at least that's what happened to me! Really impressed me. I have to ask (my regrets should it be a frequent question) have you heard of the Gong Show? (no, that is not what drew me to your page but the curiosity that grew in me after I arrived) Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/29/2019 4:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, CayCay. It's nice to hear I could impress such an impressive poet like you) As for GS, I didn't. Now I do, having looked into wiki.
Date: 5/28/2019 3:42:00 PM
This has great rhyme and flow.. a quirky take on the contest..
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/28/2019 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, S.O.)

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