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A Lover's Prayer

I’m starting to think that I love him way too much I never wanna argue I smile I wonder does he love as much as I love him He always wanna argue He frowns That’s my baby though y’all Am I making him happy.? He told me this morning that he loves me but he doesn’t know why he can’t show it He tried pills Weed Alcohol Nothing satisfied him He went to a therapist and the results broke me in half My baby My husband My everything Major depressed All was well about a month later He was happy I was happy WE was happy That’s my baby y’all But he never told me that he was done He just wanted to run He let me go I thought I was happy I thought he was happy I even thought we was happy I’m his baby y’all But he was so depressed that I’m the one that took the fall In Memory of a great friend. R.I.H. Malcolm??

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 12:56:00 AM

Jalia Conner, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 5/19/2016 2:12:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jalia. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2016 1:16:00 PM

RIP.... Nice to read, Fa... Jalia, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@