A Lovely October Morn

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October.4.2023

Anything Good POetry Contest

Sponsor- Shadow Hamilton

A lovely October morning!
Today I rose much earlier than usual.
I watch the night stealing away, 
Like an accused convict under cover.

Sunlight peeks through the leaves.
In the haze of overhanging mist,
Only the blurred silhouette of trees, in sight. 
The crows have begun their raucous call.

The leaves of grass are misted with dew.
A cool zephyr blows from the south.
The sky in scintillating colors adorn.
Even Sirius, the brightest star has paled.

Life is slowly beginning to unfold,
And men like shadows have begun to move.
The sun has now climbed to the Eastern hills,
In magisterial glory like a mighty king.

Shattering the mist with his lance like beams,
He exults like a victorious warrior.
His crystal rays rouse the sleeping birds,
And they begin their chorus in wondrous rhyme.

I enjoy the sweetness of this lovely morn.
In serene silence, I stand and watch,
The light that slowly fills the Earth,
Dispelling all trace of overhanging darkness!

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Lin Lane

Date: 10/7/2023 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement, Valsa. Your poetry is as lovely as this title.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/7/2023 5:12:00 AM

Hi Valsa a good poem that earned a place in my contest well done hugs Shadow

Valsa George
Date: 10/7/2023 9:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Shadow for this contest and the great placement I got !

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2023 1:26:00 PM

An amazing poem once again from your pen.. You have created so much imagery here and each line is a true reflection of Autumn... we have to stop still sometimes and admire the wonders that surround us.. an excellent entry into the contest.. I think Shadow will have a difficult time picking a favourite.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/5/2023 6:04:00 AM

Valsa, such an exquisite portrayal that transports me to a realm of astounding imagery and intense emotions. This poem is an absolute masterpiece, capturing the essence of a symphony. It is as if I can hear the melodious notes dancing in the air. I derive immense joy from observing the world stirring from slumber, and your poem has flawlessly depicted this captivating awakening.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/5/2023 2:08:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning dear talented poetess! You really have a way with touching my heart with how you express and describe things in such a profound manner! Brilliant diction and imagery, the flow is stunning and seamless. I love also how you’ve written “ Even Sirius, the brightest star has paled.“ love that! “ your use of similes, metaphors and creative way of showing us, is what makes this a fave of mine! I love the sun line! And also the ending, such a soul warming and serene poem!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/4/2023 8:09:00 AM

"Sunlight peeks through the leaves. In the haze of overhanging mist, Only the blurred silhouette of trees, in sight. The crows have begun their raucous call." -- "The light that slowly fills the Earth, Dispelling all trace of overhanging darkness!" Beautiful, profound writing. Blessings!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/4/2023 6:30:00 AM

Valsa, this is SO beautiful! GREAT similes! Janice