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A Lovely Little Daydream

Oh, mighty vacuum cleaner, duty calls; like magic, you suck up unsettling grime in my small world of carpets, floors, and walls. You gobble up debris in record time of lint and dust polluting my domain, to leave behind a sparkling atmosphere where peace of wholesome living can remain, ensuring my abode is bright and clear. Oh, hardy vacuum cleaner, if I could direct your force upon our total Earth; suck up its cobwebbed corners, dusty wood which clouds our vision to perceive its worth. Draw off the film- watch clarity unfurled, and make it shiny-bright as my small world. Sandra M. Haight ~NA~ Premiere Contest: A Lovely Little Daydream Sponsor: Mystic Rose Judged: 01/21/2017

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Date: 1/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
We all 'suck' at cleaning...especially when it comes to the Earth...great verse Sandra as always my friend...you can make anything sound poetic...god bless...^WW^
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, WW. Sandra
Date: 1/17/2017 7:17:00 AM
I just vacuumed and it is amazing how much dirt seeps down into the carpet even when it looks clean. A wonderful dream to help our Earth Sandra! GL in the contest. : ) 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 10:44:00 PM
Oh, I'll take that daydream any time good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 9:08:00 PM
A wonderful fantasy! We need a bit of fantasy to get through the tasks put before us.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette. Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 6:34:00 PM
What a fun, lovely poem, Sandra. A vacuum cleaner to bring clarity, I'd like that. Good luck in the contest! Agnes
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 6:13:00 PM
I just loved this.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Sunlite. Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 4:46:00 PM
What a great imaginative theme for this poem. I really enjoyed this Sandra...this poem makes one say, if only.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Chris. Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful poem. If only your day dream could come true how beautiful the world would be. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Christy. Sandra
Date: 1/16/2017 4:43:00 PM
This is a great sonnet, Sandra! The world needs your magical vacuum cleaner!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, White Wolf! Sandra

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