A Lovely Little Day Dream

The cinnamon scented days
in your grandiose porcelain cups,
as you would like to say,
in grass green warmth of May
of the sandal wood shadow
in your valley
made of three warm words from starry dark,
alongside the  moon-circles

It is lovely
A rose dance
In a tipsy trance
A blue Greece peace
descending downward
Shivering moon ice
And Amazon warmth
From mouth to mouth

“Go slow go slow “
Calls the lark
from moon-snow
“Go slow”
 
Why the distraction?
In the lovely job of translation
from fire to ice
Slice by slice
Dropping all disguise
Into a stupendously charming reality
Of collapsing charm

Then, all on a sudden
Why the reaction
Of sudden interruption?
 
The lark asks
“Look above
Visit the cascade first
The temples, the galloping horses
The beautiful bird-neck
And the awesome hills”
 
The cream coloured shaft of sky
beteen the two tension to the hilt
Maddeningly failing
Into freedom of the flood

Tumultuous silence ...
 
And he felt the  soft palm on his forehead
He came to
It was the nurse
By his hospital bed
‘Yes ?'
‘Sir, you have to ....'
'The chemotherapy?'
'Yes Sir'

A gentle smile on her face
A sandal wood shade
Of a different kind though
And ice slabs
In almost absolute temperature
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20/01/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/22/2017 11:27:00 AM
What a daydream. I'm carried there...congrats! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/23/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/22/2017 12:24:00 AM
Congrats, this was very beautiful Probir!
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur ...
Date: 1/21/2017 9:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir Hugs
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Date: 1/23/2017 9:21:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 1/21/2017 6:33:00 AM
No praises are enough for this wonderful writing of yours. Congrats on your win, Probir. A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/20/2017 11:00:00 AM
A well-woven telling. Nicely done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/21/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you ... This is an illustration of psychological defence mechanism ... The cancer patient was daydreaming in denial ...
Date: 1/20/2017 7:22:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and enchanting Probir. Really nicely done.
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Chris ...
Date: 1/20/2017 5:34:00 AM
Astounding my friend, Probir! A seven!
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Date: 1/20/2017 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 1/19/2017 11:04:00 PM
Brilliantly done! A marvelous poem, Probir /|\
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Date: 1/20/2017 4:33:00 AM
Thank you, Rick ...
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