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A Love Poem

Beloved, turn off the lights; speak to me; Is your heart to be evermore my own, does my name slip from your lips silently... content, that I should need ne'er more to moan. ~ Beloved, watch close loves acquainted eyes; reflections holds no secrets from within. For the souls bidding eyes will ne'er tell lies, remember, doubt not… your want is my sin. ~ Beloved, wilt thou walk with me through dreams, come lay with me as if I were dying? Kiss my mouth, give me water from your stream; listen love...the voice of the rain’s crying. Loves lives through winters cold, summers fire, though daybreak begins, as the night retires.

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Date: 11/15/2020 8:30:00 AM
Passionate work. Enjoyed reading this sonnet. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 11/16/2020 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Sara! ??
Date: 4/4/2018 12:26:00 PM
A wonder in love.... Heart shouts faintly beloved, And the salty mind pierces eyes, to express the warn!!! "remember, doubt not… your want is my sin." Prefect warn message... If not wrong this is been delivered by eyes Nicely created! Namastey
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Date: 1/16/2018 12:12:00 PM
Hello Nicole, I do think that you have written a beautiful love poem. This is how I see your poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:26:00 AM
A very strong, loving and unique love Poem. Very heart telling.
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write Nicole, such great imagery with nice rhyme and flow. Really loved this beauty of ink! Blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:25:00 PM
Reminiscent of scripture. 1 Corinthians 13:4-8
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Date: 4/3/2017 10:47:00 AM
Hi Nicole: A beautiful love poem with a subtle taste of sensuality. I sensed a feeling in your words and I hope it was symbiotic.
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Date: 3/29/2017 7:38:00 AM
A beautiful Sonnet.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:26:00 PM
I'm so glad that you liked it James...thank you!
Date: 3/29/2017 1:54:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, I love the line ... wilt thou walk with me through dreams .. a 7 - nice write Nicole
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael!
Date: 3/28/2017 6:06:00 PM
Kudos for your lifetime membership. This is so full of true love, and I truly enjoyed it.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:23:00 PM
Many thanks for your comment Sunlite! :-)
Date: 11/23/2016 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 11/27/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Kenneth :)
Date: 6/19/2016 6:14:00 PM
A very beautiful piece... I read it more than once... It was that impressive. Fav for me.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 11/27/2016 3:53:00 PM
Forgive my late reply...I was not online for past few months. Thank you greatly for your comment!
Date: 6/4/2014 11:25:00 PM
This is a fantastic , romantic rainbow sent to remind the world that Love endures all! Terrific!!!!!!!!!!
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/5/2014 9:44:00 AM
Hello Robert! Yes love endures all things . Thank you for your reply!
Date: 6/4/2014 1:09:00 PM
This is an awesome romantic poem!!! Love it!!
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/5/2014 9:41:00 AM
Hi Pace! So glad you liked this piece...Thank you for your comment!
Date: 6/3/2014 9:40:00 PM
Like your other poem - mystical,beautiful. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/3/2014 9:43:00 PM
My thanks to you Matthew!
Date: 6/1/2014 3:48:00 PM
A beautiful and longing Sonnet, enjoyed so much! Best, Robert
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/1/2014 6:04:00 PM
I am so glad that you enjoyed it Robert....Thank you so much! :-) Nicole
Date: 5/31/2014 7:37:00 PM
I see a softness to this sonnet, a warmth that a love poem should have...it has life, well done
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/1/2014 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Frederic for such a lovely reply to this poem. I appreciate your thoughts! Nicole

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