A Love Poem

Beloved, turn off the lights; speak to me;
Is your heart to be evermore my own,
does my name slip from your lips silently...
content, that I should need ne'er more to moan.
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Beloved, watch close loves acquainted eyes;
reflections holds no secrets from within.
For the souls bidding eyes will ne'er tell lies,
remember, doubt not… your want is my sin.
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Beloved, wilt thou walk with me through dreams,
come lay with me as if I were dying?
Kiss my mouth, give me water from your stream;
listen love...the voice of the rain’s crying.

Loves lives through winters cold, summers fire,
though daybreak begins, as the night retires.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/16/2018 12:12:00 PM
Hello Nicole, I do think that you have written a beautiful love poem. This is how I see your poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/7/2018 10:26:00 AM
A very strong, loving and unique love Poem. Very heart telling.
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:13:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write Nicole, such great imagery with nice rhyme and flow. Really loved this beauty of ink! Blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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Date: 4/18/2017 8:25:00 PM
Reminiscent of scripture. 1 Corinthians 13:4-8
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Date: 4/3/2017 10:47:00 AM
Hi Nicole: A beautiful love poem with a subtle taste of sensuality. I sensed a feeling in your words and I hope it was symbiotic.
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Date: 3/29/2017 7:38:00 AM
A beautiful Sonnet.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:26:00 PM
I'm so glad that you liked it James...thank you!
Date: 3/29/2017 1:54:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, I love the line ... wilt thou walk with me through dreams .. a 7 - nice write Nicole
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael!
Date: 3/28/2017 6:06:00 PM
Kudos for your lifetime membership. This is so full of true love, and I truly enjoyed it.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 3/29/2017 5:23:00 PM
Many thanks for your comment Sunlite! :-)
Date: 11/23/2016 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 11/27/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Kenneth :)
Date: 6/19/2016 6:14:00 PM
A very beautiful piece... I read it more than once... It was that impressive. Fav for me.
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 11/27/2016 3:53:00 PM
Forgive my late reply...I was not online for past few months. Thank you greatly for your comment!
Date: 6/4/2014 11:25:00 PM
This is a fantastic , romantic rainbow sent to remind the world that Love endures all! Terrific!!!!!!!!!!
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/5/2014 9:44:00 AM
Hello Robert! Yes love endures all things . Thank you for your reply!
Date: 6/4/2014 1:09:00 PM
This is an awesome romantic poem!!! Love it!!
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/5/2014 9:41:00 AM
Hi Pace! So glad you liked this piece...Thank you for your comment!
Date: 6/3/2014 9:40:00 PM
Like your other poem - mystical,beautiful. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/3/2014 9:43:00 PM
My thanks to you Matthew!
Date: 6/1/2014 3:48:00 PM
A beautiful and longing Sonnet, enjoyed so much! Best, Robert
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/1/2014 6:04:00 PM
I am so glad that you enjoyed it Robert....Thank you so much! :-) Nicole
Date: 5/31/2014 7:37:00 PM
I see a softness to this sonnet, a warmth that a love poem should have...it has life, well done
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T.Nicole Williams
Date: 6/1/2014 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Frederic for such a lovely reply to this poem. I appreciate your thoughts! Nicole