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A Loss

Fear usually gripped my nerves I dreaded broken bottles my heart perchance be served To a wetland I could lose you Little I thought of the deadwood Ready I to send to the urn any jostler Alas the heart I guarded against the living, had a suitor waiting at the great gulf course in the sky I couldn't compete with his riz He snatched you with ease. All I have now are memories I am pained by your silence, Amy Tell me you hate it where you are,please

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Date: 8/31/2024 7:49:00 AM
Amazing words Mr. Arthur. Well done. As poetic as ever. The words to this poem heals one of artistic ailments. It sets one free by enjoying the uniqueness of its in-depth ness. 10/10 as a rating for this poem.
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Date: 8/31/2024 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Isaiah. A very poetic comment

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