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When I was small I thought I was unique, Another soul like me had never lived, With a mind rightly in a different league, From its troubles I’d give the world a lift. All too soon, my aura began to fade, Gone! Dreams of a life extraordinary. In an adult world of an average grade, I flew on a common trajectory. In my later years, I came to realize, Different from the rest my instincts were not, With humanity I could sympathize, Mine was a story sharing the same plot. By hard-earned wisdom I have been set free, To be at ease with the man that is me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/4/2017 10:06:00 PM
Wow Bernard, your sentiments so beautifully expressed in your lovely sonnet pulse with a flowing rhythm that's a pure joy to read. Wondrous theme with great lines. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 11/5/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. You're very kind, as always :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/5/2017 9:35:00 AM
Sometimes, straight forward wisdom poetically expressed can be very impactful even without all the bells and whistles of imagery... as your poem proves my case beautifully... :)
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Bernard Chan
Date: 11/5/2017 4:56:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! This is a pretty straightforward write, not the kind with beautiful imagery where you craft every word to perfection, but just a small piece of wisdom, if you can even call it that, that I've been able to take out of life. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to check it out, Susan!! :)
Date: 9/3/2017 4:00:00 PM
I identify with this a lot, thank you for expressing it.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 9/3/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Sofia.

Book: Shattered Sighs