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A Long Journey and Very Sad Look Back

A Long Journey And Very Sad Look Back Looking back at those youthful follies invited Days of sweet glory and thoughts of being knighted Time sends back its memories of the lively ghost My crazy younger self, that all too willing host Life has raced through distant extended middle years With its love, joy, misery, pains and saddest tears Longings bereft of Love's satisfying reprieves Brave daredevil fools taunted Fate, were thick as thieves Then time slapped us from slumber with its mighty knocks No bluffs of bravado could destroy these new shocks Midnight dreams remind us of death and true love lost No lying can convince, wild-times were worth the cost Youthful folly serves a purpose we may not know For with each knock down, our wisdom began to grow Robert J. Lindley , 2-15-2017 Sonnet, Lin 12/12 Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 Total # Syllables: 168 Total # Words: 123 Note: This sonnet was inspired by a conversation I had this morn with an old friend from my youth. He had just learned of my mother's recent death and called to give condolences. He started speaking about the many very wild times we had over 40 years ago. After thinking about that conversation most of today, this sonnet started forming in my head. With the sad truth being, those wild young times were folly and not a positive regardless of how we may choose to remember/romanticize them.

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Date: 3/22/2017 8:37:00 PM
This is wonderful
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/22/2017 8:41:00 PM
THANK YOU MUCH .
Date: 2/19/2017 2:09:00 PM
Very well written look back on past times and I agree with others, such wisdom gained. :) Bless you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/19/2017 3:05:00 PM
THANK YOU MY FRIEND. Life has been interesting for me, even with its many tribulations.
Date: 2/16/2017 9:47:00 PM
Indeed Robert...as we all...and mothers always know...no matter what...and always love their children...Big Hugggs my friend!! Deb
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2017 5:23:00 AM
My friend, you said it right. Mothers are specially blessed by God to care for and love their children! To forgive our blindness and follies.
Date: 2/16/2017 2:34:00 AM
Wisdom in your sonnet, Robert:) beautiful:)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2017 5:21:00 AM
Thank you JO. I am just lucky to have survived and lived long enough to understand it and write a bit about it. I pray you are doing well my friend.
Date: 2/16/2017 12:52:00 AM
7+ Oh Robert, I sure caght a deep one of your pieces. It seem almost equally joyful and sad at once. As always your perfect form and glorious flow...So nice to have time to read you again....peace, love & light...jill
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2017 5:16:00 AM
I missed your comments my good friend. I hope you are well and life treats you great. This poem came out easily as it was based upon my own wild youth.
Date: 2/16/2017 12:10:00 AM
An outstanding sonnet, Robert! It really does flow well with 12 syllables! Good to see you are still writing my friend!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2017 5:13:00 AM
That you my friend. Life comes as it may to each of us, the decisions to face it and thrive are tests given throughout our lives
Date: 2/15/2017 7:08:00 PM
It sure was fun while we were doing it, though, Robert. Nice sonnet:)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2017 5:11:00 AM
That it was at the time! And it had to "get öut of us".. Sadly, I had several friends that did not survive that outing.

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