A Long Journey

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          it has been a long journey for me
this journey we call life
     with many twists and turns
curves and dips . . . 
          this puzzle not yet complete
because of one missing piece 
     each day I begin with a prayer
will turn back the pages of time and sorrow
          no rock will be left unturned . . . 
               so young and lost
wanting only to be loved
     and love is what I found one night . . .
my family sent me away in shame
with no one to protect me or comfort me
     and when you were born 
        I held you close to my heart
and I knew the true meaning of love
          realizing their mistake
the nurses pulled you from my arms . . . 
I dream of what could have been for us
          we could have made it in this world
could have been so happy
     just you and me together 
  why would no one give us a chance  . . . 
have spent my life searching for you
               dreaming an impossible dream
  praying to find you somehow or somewhere
          to look into your face again
my heart aches each day from searching
                  and not finding . . . .

then . . .
          by accident I found the answer
          why I could never find you
  you lay buried at the family tomb
          all these years a secret . . . 
     why could my parents not tell me
      why did they let me search the world
I will never get an answer for they lay buried too . . .
had your name engraved on the headstone
               and I go there often to visit you
found this special love again for a second time
there is no greater love-   than a mother and child
        and when my earthly life ends
    in heaven . .  I will hold you once again
                       my son 

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July 23, 2013


Poetry/Free Verse/a long journey
Copyright Protected, ID 07-494-451-23
All Rights Reserved, 2013,  Constance La France


Submitted to the Standard contest, When Love Reckons 
For A Second Time, sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged 07/2013

Second Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/2/2016 2:04:00 AM
Oh this was really sad it made me cry, What a wonderful poem even though it's a sad ending, Congrats 1st for me xxx
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Date: 8/31/2016 4:12:00 PM
Yes, your poem brought tears to my eyes too, Broken Wings. So heartfelt and sad, but how powerfully you brought that sadness to our hearts with your poetic words and imagery. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/31/2016 4:07:00 PM
This beautiful poem made me cry. Congratulations on your win, Constance! Janice
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Date: 8/31/2016 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:19:00 PM
a lovely win...... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:38:00 AM
it's an awesome poem...congrats...PD
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:35:00 AM
This is heart breaking. You have expressed your emotions with Eloquence.
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Date: 7/27/2013 3:30:00 PM
such a tender and moving write, Constance - I know you will hold him again some day x
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Date: 7/23/2013 7:46:00 PM
This is a tremendous and stupendous write my friend! I am very impressed wit the way you have written this poem Constance, such elegance! I truly loved reading this outstanding p0oem this evening! Great Work!!
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