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A Long-Needed Vacation

a long-needed vacation I'll take or romantic getaway on school brake. maybe to a casino where I can rake spin the wheel and a fortune I'll make or blow and give the dice a shake maybe I'll go fishing on a lake, a piece of land with gold I'll stake with a nesting duck and a drake. 2/3/2022 inspired by L MILTON HANKINS blog

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Date: 2/5/2022 12:57:00 AM
Well it sounds like a holiday of adventure you are about to have . Then when you come back you can poetically describe your holiday, Enjoy Eve my friend . Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:55:00 PM
Nice little monorhyme, Eve:)
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Date: 2/4/2022 8:25:00 AM
Eve, A vacation with a toss of the dice in romance. Many lives started down the path just this way. -Richard
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Date: 2/4/2022 7:20:00 AM
Brilliant monorhyme. HUgs.
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Date: 2/4/2022 2:00:00 AM
Lovely monorhyme Eve!
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Date: 2/3/2022 7:25:00 PM
Lovely.... great flow and rhythm ! Well done Eve
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