A Lonely Man

He lives on his own
Far away from life
In a sheltered glen
Since he lost his wife

Nothing can replace
The previous years that he had
It was timeless and loving
He now lives alone and sad
 
Surrounded by emptiness
Just like his heart
His family is now nature
Life at sixty, his new start
 
In a run down bothy
On the Cairngorms, above Aviemore
The Scottish countryside consoles him
His heart now a lonely sore
 
Everyday when he awakes
He thinks of his dear wife
Out of the window he looks
Out there is his life

He lives of the land
The best he can
Sometimes he heads into town
A lost looking man

The years have passed by
He still lives on his own
His loss finally accepted
Into his lonliness, he has grown




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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 7:55 AM
you made me remember my grandfather . I daw how he became so sad when he lost my grandmother ... awesome the more i read the more am likinh how you write.. love your short poems mr james
Fraser Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Sometimes other people's poems strike a chord that relates to the reader, or readers. I'm glad you're liking my humble poems Olive, as I sure love reading yours, and commenting, James :)
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 10:37 AM
heartwrenching, i like the way you put you're feelings in my heart
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Oh, I missed this one, James. Just checking out this great feature I had not paid attention to before now. You are on the HOT list with this one. and it is quite a poignat read. I just loved how you ended that he accepted his loss and "grew into" the lonliness" Hope you are well! andrea
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 7:13 AM
A very moving write, James. I hate it when seniors have to live alone. And I sure have missed reading your work. This heads to my favorites before I sign off to nurse my injury. Much love, Carolyn
Hilliker Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 1:23 AM
Such a sad poem. I pray for light and happiness.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Thankxxx Highlander for your blog comments for well wishes in the New Year .. same back at u.. HNY 2010 .. with blessings... luv... creativeness... friendship... and encouragement from u always... Linda-Marie... did u read my One Little Prayer for Ms. Carolyn who fell and hurt her knee very badly???
Sweetheart Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 6:47 PM
Sad story .. when one spouse goes the other is left to ponder life without the one who made life worthwhile... thankxxx for this touching write James... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 11:39 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup James. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 10:06 AM
I wrote a sonnet entitled 'The Rose and the Thorn '.It could have been written by the man in this story. If you have time, please read it. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 9:25 AM
A wise , lonely man. He did not leave his memories and try to find a new life. He has probably found a quiet satisfaction in this place where he was happy. Thank you for your comments. They mean so much to me. Love, Joyce
Yamin Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 8:43 AM
What a sad poem, James. Doubtless a beautiful poem. I am wondering, however, why did you post it on the happy occasion of Christmas and New Year. In my experience happy occasions make some people more sad. Is this the reason? Cheer up! Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem 'Do not Knock being featured this week. God Bless you. Happy New Year! May 2010 bring happiness, health and love in your life and make your pen even stronger. -Mohammad Yamin
Haick Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 8:12 PM
So very sad, James. It's hard enough being lonely and young but to be old and lonely must be really tough. Yet, I know memories are priceless and can possibly see us through the length of our days. Great write, as usual, Highlander! Peace and love, Audrey
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December 28, 2009 at 4:24 PM
Let me brush a tear away, dear heart, I know this pain, you write so well for us, you are not alone in this sadness but you do have something more valuable than gold, you have words and the ability to put them to paper, if you have not read my poem already called, Into the Future, it speaks, of the same loneliness..... and thanks so much for your kind comments on my poem, the kiss...
Faulkner Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 3:53 PM
excellent write...love and peace: james
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 12:05 PM
James what a wonderful write this is...so filled with that "lost" feeling you have captured with your imagery. Loss of a loved one is never easy. The lifelong love you have described here is a beautiful thing that many wish to acquire but won't. Thanks so much for sharing this sensational write and for taking the time to read my works. Also, many thanks for your always kind comments and words of encouragement. All is much appreciated! Have a glorious day~Mary
Toran Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 11:53 AM
I enjoyed this piece. It's very realistic and the rhyme flow is smooth. I love the simplicity, the common language, and the mellow vocabulary. Nice job. Thanks for the congrats on my featured write. Milt
Austin Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 11:20 AM
I suppose we come into this life alone, go out alone. At least this is one theory. But being alone within reality is a bummer, a bummer we have to get used to or perish. Here's wishing this soul and all souls a very Happy New Year. Love, daver
Goff Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 10:42 AM
very much enjoyed this fine write! Highlander!... and thanks for your always welcome comments! jimmy james goff
Kendrick Avatar
December 28, 2009 at 8:56 AM
James, this one broke my heart. He is like the swan, dove, and other birds and animals that mate for life. You have the emotion here my friend. If it is true there are many lonely women out there that would love companionship. Keep the creative pen flowing for you fill my heart to overflowing. Sara
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