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A Lonely Leaf

A lonely golden leaf falling gently to the river below, drifting slowly down river, toward places unknown, has served it's purpose in this old world. wrote 9-20-08

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/24/2008 11:01:00 AM

James lovely thought provoking write ! Love the feeling I get from reading this! Laura :)

Deneen White

Date: 9/23/2008 4:25:00 PM

I like the tempo and the flow of this write, it gives one food for thought, thanks for your comments always, take care D-nyce

George Williams

Date: 9/23/2008 2:31:00 PM

Such a beautiful and colorful poem.

Brian Strand

Date: 9/23/2008 2:38:00 AM

You capture the mood well .James.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 9/22/2008 4:31:00 PM

I like how your have captured the process of the ecosystem in this poem. The leaf now serves another purpose in live. Great job! ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/21/2008 7:16:00 AM

You painted a pretty picture and so much more. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/21/2008 3:48:00 AM

Lovely images...I always try to catch the first falling fall leaf I see. :) love Kristin

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 9/21/2008 12:09:00 AM

Nice creativity. There's a hidden message inside which is indeed very appealing. Love Chitra