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Even the smallest ants cast long shadows While carrying the weight of a large chunk Inching along with food that seems shallow Even the smallest ants cast long shadows Weighted down and used like a wheelbarrow Constant loads has its spirit drawn and shrunk Even the smallest ants cast long shadows While carrying the weight of a large chunk Sponsor: Scott Thirtyseven Contest: Even The Smallest Ants Cast Long Shadows Written: January 17, 2015

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/1/2015 6:56:00 AM

I was hoping to present a little more fanfare, but while the Twitter looks to have its head turned my way, here goes. "Tweets away".

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/19/2015 4:07:00 AM

Even better with pictures. Just wish that TPS would let us see the pics while judging. Congrats on a well deserved equal second. I'm going to spend the next week working on my Twitter profile, with a view to tweeting links on about the 1st of March.

Donna Jones

Date: 2/16/2015 1:31:00 PM

Awesome job Sarah.....well done! Hope all is well....congratulations on your nice win.:-) :-)

Skat A

Date: 2/16/2015 12:52:00 AM

Wonderful win, Sara....SKAT

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 2/15/2015 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your ant- imated win :o)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/15/2015 11:35:00 AM

Coming back...Congratulations on your win. Love Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2015 8:13:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/15/2015 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/15/2015 3:16:00 AM

Sara, a nice winning triolet. congrats. Mohan

Rob Carmack

Date: 2/14/2015 10:23:00 PM

Sara, congrats on your win.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/14/2015 9:54:00 PM

Sara, a heartfelt congratulations to your on your top win for great Triolet! What an amazing, clever way to describe their long shadows! Hugs, Sandra

Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 8:09:00 AM

oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/25/2015 7:08:00 PM

This has to be a winner! Light & Love

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2015 2:14:00 PM

Nice one Sara. It's simply amazing what an Ant can carry above and beyond it's own weight. Love this little piece, James :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 2:12:00 PM

Another great pen! Best of luck in the contests.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/20/2015 1:45:00 PM

A great message in here! The smallest people can cast big shadows. The smallest acts can have big rewards.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2015 12:53:00 PM

- Small things.... become big ..... !!! - Wonderful poem for the contest, dear Sara - Good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/18/2015 9:45:00 AM

O so well written so enjoyable. I think this could be one of the best model poems for children. You have used the line'Even the smallest ants cast long shadows' three times in this small poem. It has helped to heighten the intensity of the great message ( in simple words)Good luck. It must be in the topper's list.God bless you Sara.>>>rajat

David Fisher

Date: 1/18/2015 9:43:00 AM

We can learn a lot from your poem and the ant. I like how the Triolet form repeats and reminds us of what can be done.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/18/2015 8:49:00 AM

Very well written with strong images and great flow. Emile.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/18/2015 2:37:00 AM

great pen Sara gl in contest hugs

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2015 9:47:00 PM

nicely done Sara, Love ~SKAT~

David Meade

Date: 1/17/2015 8:16:00 PM

mighty is the ant . . . nice pic!! You captured the strength of the small . . . 7

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/17/2015 5:35:00 PM

Aren't they the most interesting creatures? I love their determination. No matter how many times you put obstacles in their way, they will continue on. I found your poem delightful Sara. A wonderful Triolet entry! Best of luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2015 5:30:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Sara I love the power of the repeated lines with the triolet form - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx