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A Little Game--Reverse

He loves me, he loves me not Repeated over and over Petals plucked and tossed to the wind A little game played by a hopeful heart Laughing at herself all the while In the first blush of romance Hoping for any small sign From the garden a daisy picked After a magical evening spent Sun shining brightly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 3:07:00 AM
I love this, I don't love this...NOT!...Beautifully done Barbara...This was a hard contest wasn't it? - Tim
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Date: 8/30/2013 8:25:00 PM
A sweet memory plucking daisies that most of us girls fondly recall, you told it so lovely! Congrats on an terrific write and win! Hugs
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Date: 8/30/2013 6:08:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:51:00 PM
i blush with you, barbara.. so winsome, this piece... sweet congrats and hugggs!.:)
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:23:00 AM
Those Daisies!!! Do they lie?..Congrats on your creative win..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2013 9:47:00 AM
enjoyed... Congrats... PD
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:39:00 AM
I especially like this one in reverse. Well done! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:32:00 PM
I remember that game all too well...thanks for jarring my memory....congrats on the win :)
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:30:00 PM
so does he loves you or not? Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/27/2013 4:42:00 PM
I think we all played this game....cute poem....congratulations on a wonderful win....
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Date: 8/27/2013 3:49:00 PM
This has such a joyful and playful quality that I love.......either way !! Congratulations, Barbara!
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Date: 8/11/2013 2:13:00 PM
... so sweet - I love it Barbara! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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