Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- A Little Bit of Magic - Nursery Rhyme -

      I met a tiny green worm
      her name was Milla Storm.

      On a branch the worm breathed sleepy
      "a little rest in the sun can't hurt me".

      She woke up stiff, numb and compact
      a deep long sleep, that's a fact.

      "Something stings and scratches on my back"
      complained sad ... such an unpleasant smack.

      She felt so isolated and trapped -
      almost as kidnapped.

      Had to fight bravely through the cocoon
      as she hummed a joyful tune.

      Milla tried to stretch out her feet
      suddenly she noticed something sweet.

      "Close your eyes - look I can fly ... F-L-Y 
       I'm a gorgeous butterfly".





07.03.2023
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Kids Creativity and Learning Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
1st place in the contest

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Kelly Deschler April 3, 2023 at 10:11 AM A wonderful nursery rhyme... I can see a child's eyes growing wide with wonder as they read this one... Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise!

Len Gasun March 25, 2023 at 7:41 PM So fantastic and beautiful nursery rhyme my dear friend Annelise. So enjoyable to read. I love it especially the ending. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper March 20, 2023 at 3:42 PM Anne-Lise, congratulation on your win. Thank you so much for creating a wonderful educational nursery rhyme for the contest. Many blessings to you. Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 20, 2023 at 1:59 PM Awww...so sweet, Dear Anne-Lise! Such a great rhyming...and the ending is perfect/fabulous!

Linda Alice Fowler March 20, 2023 at 12:31 PM Nicely done Anne-Lise! These are so much fun to write, and to read! Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2023 at 12:26 PM back with congrats. Yours was one of my favorites on the green worm theme.

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2023 at 11:28 AM Back with Congratulation on your win. A fun write/picture. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day..................

Beryl Edmonds March 20, 2023 at 10:57 AM Back to say congratulations on the win in Eve’s contest… Belle

Sotto Poet March 20, 2023 at 10:50 AM This beautiful poetry may be read and enjoyed by people of all ages. I enjoyed reading this, and congrats on your win.

Speaks Volumes March 20, 2023 at 8:48 AM Lovely poem. Hearty Congratulations. So sweet.. Hugs

Anisha Dutta March 20, 2023 at 4:58 AM Excellent composition. All the best for contest. Love. Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2023 at 8:17 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Anisha :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds March 19, 2023 at 3:13 PM That so good Anne-Lise, love all the lines in the nursery rhyme and the beautiful ending… Hugs, Belle :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2023 at 8:17 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Belle :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes March 12, 2023 at 6:35 AM Excellent, Good luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2023 at 2:07 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on my nursery rhyme poem, Wendy :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2023 at 12:59 PM So adorable. I can't wait to do a poem on the green worm. Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2023 at 2:06 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Howard Kerr March 9, 2023 at 6:04 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, These couplets are witty, humorous, and charming. Flawless and free-flowing. Thank you so much for your generous review of my extended Rainbow piece. Warm regards Howard

Joanna Daniel March 8, 2023 at 9:07 PM Very sweet one, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 2:12 AM - Thanks so much, Jo :) - hugs

Valsa George March 8, 2023 at 8:55 PM The metamorphosis of the worm into a butterfly is so remarkably delineated ! I am sure Eve will rate it as one of the Best. Smile, dear Smile ! Love and hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 2:11 AM - What matters most is that she likes it and can use it in her book ... many thanks for your lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Joseph P. DiMino March 8, 2023 at 10:51 AM So delightful!!! Needs to be an illustrated booklet for children to be magically read and explained. A treasure. A FAVE! Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:18 AM - A fave really came as a surprise ... I'm so insecure when I write in rhyme ... easy in my mother tongue ... but not in English ... many thanks, Joe :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis March 8, 2023 at 9:24 AM A very cute and entertaining poem, my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:19 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Demetrios :) - hugs

Heidi Sands March 8, 2023 at 8:18 AM Very sweet poem I enjoyed this :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:20 AM - Thank you, dear Heidi ... glad you enjoy it :) - hugs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 8, 2023 at 6:35 AM Wow what a lovely poem , one of your best in super rhyming, transformation from caterpillar to butterfly. Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too. Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:22 AM - A pleasure to receive your comment and a pleasure to read your poem ... thank you, S.zaynab :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin March 8, 2023 at 3:38 AM Anne-Lise, this is wonderful! Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:22 AM - Thanks so much, Tania :) - hugs

Daniel Turner March 8, 2023 at 2:35 AM I guess brilliant minds think alike:) Your's is sweet, Anne. I know Eve will like it. Have a wonderful day. Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:23 AM - I hope Eve will like it... many thanks for your lovely comment, Daniel :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar March 8, 2023 at 1:55 AM Cute nursery rhyme, dear Anne Lise. Best for a win. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:25 AM - Thank you for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick March 7, 2023 at 1:35 PM Ahh!! I like this one. I had one in mind for this contest, alas, I did not get it written in time for the contest. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with a kind review. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2023 at 11:26 AM - Send a contribution ... the contest is not full yet - Many thanks for your comment on my poem, Sara :) - hugs

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