A Line of Kids

I often see a line of kids
With vests of neon green
Go walking down the street; it is
A charming urban scene.

They’re anywhere from two to four,
Connected by a rope,
So no one up and wanders off;
At least that is the hope.

A grown-up walks in front and back
And stops to deal with tears,
But mostly, it’s a happy group,
Or that’s how it appears.

I’m sure they get to run around
As those in preschool should,
Though, being city kids, they also
Stroll the neighborhood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:52 PM
It is cute: The Neon Gang, I guess.
Brotherton Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:54 PM
A clever poem. Your talent shows us things that most of us look right past. Thanks for reminding us there are many stories hiding in the simplest things.
Situation Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Your rhyming always makes it good.
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 4:46 PM
I see the kids here walking 2 by 2 in a 'crocodile. your description of them is quite charming Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
Baker Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 4:46 PM
A cute scene to observe, Ilene, and a fine poem to give them recognition. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:23 PM
They are so cute!
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:14 PM
So cute. My daughter did head start at age 3. Her speech development was really weird. Anyway it is a nice program free to kids low income or with disabilities
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:30 PM
You certainly see some awesome sights on your walks Ilene. Hope your arm is okay now. Tom
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