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A Life Story

Let me tell you a story……..
Nothing new under the sun really.
Happened many times.

Autumn flourished and Christmas was near.
Hark, the bells tolled.
The womanizer discovered love.
Too late.
For now she died much too quick.

Friends rally round.
Especially Lisa, his illegitimate daughter.
All in vain.  For now his love is dead.

A year passed. 
He stood near a window
as fluffy snow fell gently.
He looked at that set of seashells,
An ivory box and inside his old watch 
which she gave him as mementos.
Outside raucous seagulls flew,
a harbinger of further devastating storms.
Yet the worst tempest was in his heart.
Tears fell profusely.

But time flies.
Rapturous Spring is in full swing.
Tranquillity reigns in his heart.
All the family drift 
On the boat on the languid lake.
Lisa happy to be with her father,
And his new wife.
He holds his own child with care
Will it be the end of his womanizing?

A white swan glides near.
Euphoric tranquillity reigns. 

16 April 2022 
Form N - Narrative - New Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Theme: Life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Anaya Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 5:09 PM
I see attached hearts much too often mistaken for love! Man will have his addiction to women over and over again. A wolf on his amorous adventures has fallen and is lucky in love. Seems tranquil but karma has its way! Put in their hearts a desire to know Him and to seek truth and tranquility will abide. Congratulations! To the Victors go the spoils!
Deo Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 1:13 AM
I enjoyed your art again, Victor, Thanks and shalom, shalom in the LORD. amen
La France Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Victor, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Narrative, Let me tell you a story ... contest, blessings ~Constance
Buhagiar Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your story/write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Alex Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Beautiful narration and very beautiful ending. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 8:00 PM
Back with many congratulations on your well-deserved win, Victor. With this magnificent poem, you have more than earned it.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:16 AM
A wonderful story Victor, love is a mystery isn’t it just… Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 1:31 PM
A womanizer…an illegitimate daughter (how sad to bear that name), and a second chance!
Y. Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 3:07 PM
WoW! Victor, You penned a good story from start to finish. I found it sad but I as continued to read my sadness turned to joy. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest-Alexis
Poet Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 6:49 PM
Victor, I really loved reading your work. Wonderful tale poetry; I really like the way it streams so instinctually:) Wishing you the best of success in the contest
Rose  Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 6:27 PM
beautifully penned Victor, Happy Easter, all the best
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Is there ever a womanizer turn to be good.. possibly for the children , but never a wife unless she doesn't care.
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Once a womanizer always a womanizer unless he gets so old it can't happen any more. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Wonderful story poem, Victor, love how it flows so naturally:) Happy Resurrection Day:)
Deo Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 3:47 PM
well-done Victor, as if you were there! Narrative poem of merit. I liked the sad lines, too, as in: "Yet the worst tempest was in his heart." Is it over? (Happy and Blessed Resurrection Sunday in Jesus; name)
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 10:24 AM
I really like how poetic you made your narrative. I was expecting a true story though!!! I guess it was not in her rules. Gotta check her contest out again!
Buehler Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 9:14 AM
I love this beautiful tale of a womanizer who finally discovers what's really important. Good luck in the contest, Evelyn
Seeker Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Good to see you participating in contests, Victor! Enjoy!
George Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 6:16 AM
The story has a happy ending .... the womanizer turning into a responsible father to his daughter and a loving partner to his wife, now enjoying a cruise over the languid lake with a heart placid as the silent waters.... Best of luck in the contest!
Skelly Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 6:12 AM
I liked the swan symbolism in the last couple of lines : grace, beauty, love, trust, and loyalty. Your protagonist found them all....Delice
Cunningham Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 5:50 AM
A well written narrative Victor. Quite an emotional one too, good luck in the contest and happy Easter. Tom
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 4:05 AM
I like the happy turn towards the ending. You painted two portraits of the man expertly as always. The ending spells a new beginning.
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 12:54 AM
i know Constance will just love this beauty Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
M  Avatar
April 16, 2022 at 12:34 AM
A simply beautiful poem Victor…..a story I didn’t want to end! Debx
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