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A Letter On the Desktop

A letter lies collecting dust upon the corner of my desk, like dead leaves on the winter’s crust. ‘Twas written by her years ago, and leaving me was such a blow, that brings back mem’ries so grotesque. When love was young, our hearts aflame, like embers burning, love on fire. But she thought love was just a game, or maybe thought her life bereft; but either way she up and left; this letter stating her desire. May 7, 2018 Contest: Rhyme Time 3 Contest: Laura Loo

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Date: 5/7/2018 1:05:00 PM
A poem which brings it straight to the reader to feel. Well done John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:44:00 PM
I appreciate your comments, Heidi, thank you. John
Date: 5/7/2018 1:05:00 PM
It's sad when love is only one sided, it can be really painful, great write John. Good luck. Tom. PS, you might want to check out Lin Lanes latest. I'll say no more .
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Tom, I appreciate it. I posted my reply to Lin for all to see, check it out. John
Date: 5/7/2018 10:11:00 AM
ohh, the heartbreak of young love...a beautifully poignant work, john..huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I appreciate your comments and visit. John
Date: 5/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
And you kept it on the desk... ever present...Emotions...Nice one John
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thank for the comments and visit, Arturo, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/7/2018 7:49:00 AM
I got a little chill. Great ink! My best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/7/2018 7:52:00 AM
Maureen, thanks so much for your comments and visit, I appreciate it. John

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