A Letter From God

Why are we so stupid, Lord? Why do we yell and shout, rant and rave,pillage and kill? Why do we cheat and lie, ignore and disdain, leave and abandon?

We could all be so close, so loving, so kind--we all share the same things:
the fresh air, the blue sky,and oh, the rich moonlit nights....
We all have the same fears: loneliness and sickness, poverty and death....

And we all hold fast to the same dreams: friends, family, a lover, perhaps 
happy children whirling like small dervishes in their own little worlds.
A bit of praise, a kind word, work that goes well--that's all we really need.... 

I wrote this as a poem but it is really a prayer. I spoke it aloud so many times--
even unto the thick part of the blackest night until I fell into a deep, deep sleep,  
the very deepest sleep, a sleep almost like death itself....

When I awoke the next morn, the mail had come early. I opened an envelope that strangely had no stamp. It was handwritten in unreal, almost unearthly beauty. It began quite formally:

Dear Mr. ( my name ), 

I have broken my own rule to write you, 
but you are so very persistent! 

If life were easy, you would not feel alive. 
If love were easy, you would not value it. 
And if I were easy, you would never seek me. 

Faithfully yours,
God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/15/2016 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations Len on your awesome win in the contest. A lovely write. Sharon
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/16/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you, Sharon-- I much appreciate your kind words. I recently posted a sequel titled (of course) 'A Second Letter From God'-- it seems lately I think a lot of what the Big Guy might be like.
Date: 9/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
Hi Len, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my blog "An Angels Tear" if you'd like. Smiles and Hugs..... LINDA
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/14/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-- I'm always feel honored to place in one of your contests.
Date: 6/27/2016 8:46:00 PM
Len, Congrats on your awesome faithful win. Love SKAT
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/28/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/6/2016 3:21:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win Ien... wonderful pen!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/6/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma!
Date: 5/5/2016 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Len
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/6/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, Nayda!
Date: 10/18/2015 4:46:00 PM
Len, Nice to see you on Silent One's winning list. Congratulations on your win. --SKAT
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Date: 10/17/2015 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations....this looks like a Big Number One to me.....terrific..
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Date: 10/17/2015 7:32:00 AM
Ien, congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/16/2015 2:08:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this exquisite write Ien!
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Date: 6/18/2015 6:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win. A7 "I wrote this as a poem but it is really a prayer. I spoke it aloud so many times, even unto the thick part of the blackest night until I fell into a deep sleep."
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:44:00 PM
Len. Congratulations in Mystic Rose's contest **SKAT**
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Date: 6/18/2015 9:00:00 AM
I liked your poem, Len, especially your ending on how God spoke to you. Congrats on your well deserved win. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:01:00 AM
Love ur take on theme Ien! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:47:00 PM
Len :) Congratulations on your win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:44:00 PM
A letter to believers?
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