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A Leap of Faith

maybe my works are only writes should poetry speak sing or both and more can ideas without a rhythm still fall in the category i believe in touch can you feel me inhale the scent of the crackle of burning logs hear the whisper of flapping wings see the eyes that see you or taste a leap of faith -love paint with words write in every colour with a suggestive set in the grasp of sky is isn’t we decide still i wonder how does the rebel fit in or they who have no music in their pen can they shape it like a figure to admire is this just a write no label required i thought i’d ask is all poetry an orchestra conducted

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/1/2019 11:18:00 AM

" paint with words write in every colour with a suggestive set in the grasp of sky", I love these lines. Beautiful piece.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/28/2019 3:19:00 AM

Nice write. I haven't read you in such a long while. This is great and I pray God blesses you, dear friend, Gina

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/21/2019 9:10:00 AM

Innovative and visually appealing. ;0)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2019 10:58:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD, Maurice. Beautifully done.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/11/2019 5:37:00 PM

Hello Maurice Yvonne, poetry are words from the pen and muse and the heart.Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Roxane Aristy

Date: 11/10/2019 6:09:00 AM

I see a dance from the very structure of your poem. Music and poetry go hand in hand, yet no one can limit Poetry to a definition. Congratulations, Maurice,!

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 11/8/2019 10:37:00 PM

Words express the silence in our hearts. Congrats .... quite beautiful

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/29/2019 11:41:00 AM

Don't worry about "them." "how does the rebel fit in or they who have no music in their pen," just do what you do and you'll come out on top. Congratulations!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/29/2019 7:31:00 AM

I hear music, feel shapes, and see colours in words, poetry, an orchestra conducted makes perfect sense to me. Lovely write! Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Judy Ball

Date: 10/29/2019 12:44:00 AM

I believe that words can sing, can dance, that they have a melody and they even have a flavor. Words can be tart or just plain sour or they can be sweet or spicy. Words have emotion. They can be excited or melancholy. They can be scary or soothing. Words are the essence of our being. This is a great write. Congrats. God Bless, JB

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/28/2019 8:37:00 PM

Yes, it is possible for words to dance. To move like the wind. To become so much more. Congratulations Maurice, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/28/2019 8:19:00 PM

Wonderfully creative, enjoyed! Congratulations on POTD!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2019 1:16:00 PM

Aptly expressed muse thoughts, Maurice. An elegant poem of deep import. Kudos on POTD. Love and peace always.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/28/2019 10:46:00 AM

This is great work. Congratulations on the POTD

Constance La France

Date: 10/28/2019 10:15:00 AM

Maurice, congratulations on POTD with this creative and beautifully penned poem, well done !

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/28/2019 9:20:00 AM

Hi Maurice...I love how you formatted your poem and the message is wonderful. Congratulations on your deserving of POTD with this no label required poem. I look forward to seeing more.

Joseph May

Date: 10/28/2019 9:16:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Armand

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/28/2019 8:57:00 AM

Very well crafted my friend...Congrats!! on POTD!! Maurice...all the best in your endeavors...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/28/2019 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD Maurice. I agree with what Arturo said, too. Have a nice day and write on :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/28/2019 6:07:00 AM

Never thought of it any other way but SURVIVAL, I write to Be... with or without rhythm or rhyme or any format prescribed... Congratulations Emile on POTD ...this one is Unique...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2019 5:26:00 AM

- Armand you really have music in your pen :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2019 3:35:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats on POTD I wish I could write free verse as you do - the way you have formatted this piece is poetry in motion:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/27/2019 6:28:00 AM

Lovely who the poetry pulls the eyes along...and yes, this is poetry as much as any rhymed piece of writing is, dear, but you already know that. :) Good to read you again.

Alison Wonderland

Date: 10/26/2019 7:35:00 PM

Love the imagery here! We so often question our own art and yet these pictures came beautifully to life as I read it. I taste your leap of faith and it tastes like success!! A+

Carol B.

Date: 10/26/2019 3:20:00 PM

I believe your poetry to be perfect in every way. The best thing about your poetry is that it is uniquely yours. That being said I can clearly recognize your poetry as it has a style and creative rhythm that no one else can duplicate. A fav.